pick a gd name, noob Cai ji rookie, coward pr something ffs

edit, waste of a chapter

wasteful, useless info that's not needed and taking up your word spaces for more actual content towards the main story. nobody cares about a useless non party members back history and job info.

why is fang Hao so distrustful, I hate he's making people sign slave contracts just bc he's a paranoid lil turd. like dude you have one completely loyal faithful undead hero man tf up

no, it's not 🤣 stop being lazy, unless you're dyslexic or have other illiterate problems then maybe.

Female leads are meh, Darlene's transcendence is taking way to long for a useless wife that no one cares about. lina and aria should be the focus of his women. They have better personalities and are written out better than a sniffling low esteem maid and stupid Lynn whose been gone for over a hundred chapters now with hardly any info on wtf is going on. do better with the females bro, get some help from women on how to flesh them out better

ew absolutely not pls

bogging not begging

in future add less details. you're begging chapters with details about classes and dpint calculated math on theoretical damage which has no place in stories. it's fine to expand a little bit but don't waste an entire chapter on it. I'm literally skipping whole chapters at this point bc it's useless info toward the overall story. background, bad ass fight scenes, funny, sad happy, depressing, personal moments to make it feel real. these are what's needed. if you can't supply enough don't write. adding word fillers is poor authorism

I'm only reading this book mainly bc Ren is kinda cool as an anti mc and is a cold hearted ruthless bastard

only original thing about I've seen is instead of losing lvls and exp it's based off attributes instead which I kinda don't like bc it seems a lot will be recreating accts just seems like a useless complication to me. but definitely better mmo novels here but unfortunately I've finished most of the popular good ones that are completed. if you don't mind got any recs on some good ones?

kinda dumb reason to give 5* bc it's based on alchemy. can totally give you a better alchemy novel to read but it's transmigration not reincarnation

also for some of the correct English it's Ire not eirie or w/e you've been saying. feat not fit. biggest two I keep seeing and can remember off the top of my head

books good enjoy reading but idc to read about Leonel and then, just focus on ren and give quick summaries of what went on with the others. It's Ren story not all of them

I'm curious what happened to lonely snow? shortly after the guild formed I don't remember him appearing much then not at all.

more story less A/N and full stat page freaking annoying and delaying story as y'all already have a low limit of words per page got to maximize it. only do notes when absolutely necessary and keep them short and brief.

ugh annoying to keep posting full stats, just say what he dumps them into

what English are you speaking 🤦🤣

he does over 10k in criticals, probably more like 41,230 and was a special monster not boss

backfire? backstab