Prince_101_1242

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Why MC's cultivation level low ? Make his cultivation grow faster.... with progress like this i don't know how many chapter you need to finish this work . More over its getting boring be cause i already need the original novel . with mc cultivation progress this slowly it will became boring eventually. 😕

Hmm ... How to say .. It no deferent from original novel . It just only saringun added . if you want my opinion , you should make mc op or story fast peace . it would more interesting this way even if you didn't add new thing

11 people is to must ....3 or 4 would be fine . well i never seen any fan fiction with solo artist . If jun debut as solo it would be must fun

I feel like its better than original 😸 keep it up and try to realise more frequently...

Golden rod 😉 indestructible 😹

Bro pls give me link of the raw chapter

Finally i am having fun reading . ....😭😭😭!!

More update pls

Bro what competition can have a 2 year old boy....😅