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Thank you very much for the recommendation, I will read it for sure, I also thank you for this announcement, I was beginning to have suspicions about you dropping it, and about the power Stones I apologize ... after several months giving power Stones every day became a habit, something like brushing your teeth when you wake up, the only times I have not given Stones is when there is no Internet in my home, So don't feel guilty, nowadays your fic is the only thing in my library that deserves power Stones.
The conversation with priska was very good, the mc's anger felt very real, priska has nothing to do with the mc's situation but the mc is not a fair person so it is very logical that he holds a grudge against her, I am very interested in seeing her future interactions, there are no eternal allies
It is normal that ioann is weak, he has been training for a short time, his sacred gear is not the most powerful, he spent most of his life in a church, I am sure that in about 20 years he will be much stronger, and when the canon begins he should already be at least comparable to satan.
It's not bad, only that your 1st pov is very good, and I agree that an ancient being must communicate in a unique way, in dxd there are very old beings who speak like children of 15, if you can improve something that is wrong why not do it?
Your version of alchemy is fine, you could also use the alchemy of full metal alchemist, it doesn't really matter, since alchemy in dxd is very basic so you can do it as you want, and I like the interactions that the mc has, he still has the same personality but knows how to act to get better benefits.