Kiran_Krishnadas

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This is amazing . I mean I am also a fan of his other work 'Abe the Wizard'. Anyone got any pics for how the exoscelotan armor is in the beginning?

Ok I loved it but for me it feels like most harry Potter fanfiction novels . It's mostly Because I have read too many Harry Potter fanfictions . It has good story, though I don't believe the whole pounds to Galleon because Galleon like some magic gold so how it it only worth like 5 pounds ? It is your fanfic so it can be what ever you want it be. Other than that everything else is noice. I do love Ethan's and his family's personality.

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The story is very good ,the oc is well done and the other characters need to be little for fleshed out . Though Over all I loved it. Author I really hope you continue this and not drop it .

As I said it's not my cup of tea .

Dudes I am at like chapter 78 and he is like bald. So does he like ever get his hair back and like will he always be buff dude and not the young master look ? Also my review for this is its good and not the greatest but I still enjoyed I can't make and proper full review because I have like only touched the start of the story and the world .

Reality warper or arc of embodiment or words of god . something along those lines