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It stopped right when the muse of my life arrived :'(

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I really like sports fanfics, and I thought yours was very well written! But you won't release bonus chapters anymore?????????????????????????

thanks for the chapter! Did you give up on the bonus chapters?

Thanks for the chapter! When are you going to update the bonus chapters?

I only put Yumi for the conversation protagonist, because I thought it had too much description, I wanted the protagonist to show his personality more

Thanks for the feedback, I'm thinking of making him like Inosuke creating his own breath, but it will take time, he will depend a lot on his strength and technique in the beginning

When do you come out of the chapters again?? or fell? (translated by google translator)..........................................................................................

I'm really enjoying the story, but it's a shame it's only updated once a week, and it's slow paced. I hope the author releases more chapters or makes longer chapters to compensate for the slow pace of the story. (Translated by Google Translate)

I didn't understand something in this chapter, how did Ivan manage to find the protagonist if he was running for an hour at his maximum speed? Like the protagonist stopped at a place and Ivan came out of nowhere.