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PWOFalcon

PWOFalcon

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A new writer that is learning how to write

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  • PWOFalcon
    PWOFalcon1yr
    Répondu à Thiago_Gomes_8808

    Muchísimas gracias. No tienes idea de lo difícil que fue para mí decidir terminarlo. Me alegra que mucha gente sienta lo mismo.

    Ch 74 General Update
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    PWOFalcon1yr
    Répondu à PapaFactBoi

    Nett Warrior

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    PWOFalcon2yr
    Répondu à Lost_0ne

    Note, good question

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    PWOFalcon2yr
    Répondu à Lost_0ne

    It is not about forgetting, it is the lack of use in a story, remember this (and other stories) are stories. Mortars are limited short range, have to be set up, etc. When you have characters fighting the bad guys, a mortar usually are not needed or best option. Let me give you a example how I decide what I use. When I have Sharpe go into a battle situation, I have a list of what support units like air support, artillery, mortars, gunships, tanks, etc. Then I pick the most logical one I think for that situation. In addition, Vanguard teams (as usual in most war stories) are usually fast pace, going where you need them to be, mortars cannot follow that but artillery and air support can can (both have far longer range and more of a impact). Now, this is just my opinion as I am not a professional writer or served in the military (thank you for your service), I just rarely run into a situation where that is the best option to use/show. It really just depends on what story the author is writing and locations.

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    PWOFalcon2yr
    Répondu à Triparadox

    Putting two and two together. If NATO can fight at night that means they can see at night somehow. If you see a missile following a dragon or something the human mind tries to find the answers. It is more of a educated guess because some monsters like dragons and snakes see with heat and can hunt at night, and NATO can. Maybe there is something similar.

    "My master believes they can see our heat. We will need to build the trenches deep and place dirt cover above, to help hide our troops form their sights." Frayen explains. "Either way, this should help protect our troops from being directly shot at by their arrows."
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    PWOFalcon2yr
    Répondu à Triparadox

    Thank you. Will need to revisit that.

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    PWOFalcon2yr
    Répondu à Triparadox

    Actually, this is around the time I dropped the original. Up to now I was only using it as a foundation as this was my first story and figuring things out

    "Vanguard-7, this is Angel-2. We are beginning clean-up operations. You have ten seconds to clear the courtyard." The pilot of the Apache attack helicopter said over the radio.
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    PWOFalcon2yr
    Répondu à Sullen_Kitten_2861

    It was recorded from a camera on Sharpe.

    Ch 74 Chapter 74 RM
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    PWOFalcon3yr
    Répondu à Sullen_Kitten_2861

    War is hell

    Ch 52 Chapter 52 Gods and Past RM
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    PWOFalcon3yr
    Répondu à Sullen_Kitten_2861

    Thank you

    Ch 22 Chapter 22 RM
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    PWOFalcon3yr
    Répondu à Sullen_Kitten_2861

    Alien and strange new world. There not only fighting swords and bows. The US military has no doctrine how to fight a war like this, no experience, or know who these guys are, even all the different races. Having advance technology dose not remove the danger.

    While he was not in those meetings, his Logistical Officer Sarah did the math. If there were over one-hundred thousand soldiers around Alnus and the number of dead bodies they found, that meant that the US had killed at least eighty percent, maybe ninety percent of the enemy force. American forces only sustained about five casualties and seven wounded in the attack.
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    PWOFalcon3yr
    Répondu à Commissar_Hunt_6178

    It is America with NATO. After Chapter 20 I barely follow the Anime and go my own way.

    He sees the Javelin missile from the Vanguard-Bravo team flies. The missile explodes close to the dragon's arm. The blast tore the right arm off the dragon.
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    PWOFalcon3yr
    Répondu à Thenceforth

    I will go back and check. Thank you

    Ch 71 Chapter 71 Christman
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    PWOFalcon3yr
    Répondu à Thenceforth

    I reworded it to be more clear. Yang was explaining to Sharpe. ""Let me explain something Sharpe. You can pay a soldier to fire a gun. You can pay a man to fight in a firefight, but you cannot pay a man to believe in a cause. I enlisted right after 9/11, the day after the towers were hit. The problem was as the war dragged on; people forgot the plot. We did not have the right leaders and examples in place, so the war dragged out aimlessly."

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    PWOFalcon3yr
    Répondu à Thenceforth

    strange but fixed. Thank you

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    PWOFalcon3yr
    Répondu à Thenceforth

    fixed

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    PWOFalcon3yr
    Répondu à Greenplay

    With all respect, nukes and any other WMD is a horrible idea. It would be the worst approach to continue the story and end it. I assume you believe the US should have nuked Iraq, Libya, Afghanistan, Vietnam, and all the post WW2 wars the US been in. In addition, why would the US do something that would result in all of NATO abandoning them, turn Rory, Lelei, Tuke and all of their native allies against them and become the Empire they are trying to replace? It would just show Zorzal was right all along and everyone who sided with the US was wrong, the true Evil Empire. On top of that, why would you destroy land resources and kill your own troops? I am not going to Last Jedi the book for a shinny or lower the quality and standards. This is a character driven story so enjoy the ride. Its not like its been ridiculous on how the war progressed, it has bene very carefully laid out, realistically approached.

    Ch 30 V16 - Chapter 195 Battleplans
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    PWOFalcon3yr
    Répondu à racq2

    XD XD

    Ch 29 V16 - Chapter 194 Malrtis
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    PWOFalcon3yr
    Répondu à racq2

    Estoy bastante seguro de que se eliminó esa característica. Gracias por gustarme mi historia.

    Ch 28 V16 - Chapter 193 Sadera Dark Burn
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    PWOFalcon3yr
    Répondu à Ilham_Pratama_1310

    Monday

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