Kelnok

The author is not a native English speaker and it shows in their work, it is very tedious to read due to having to stop and work out what the writer was trying to say. To the author I would say either write in your native language or find a English speaker and have them proof read.

Yes it's the Luthor Mansion from Smallville.

Is his name Cryus or Alex, it keeps changing?

My favourite fiction. It is one of those that you immediately want the next chapter.

I am starting to panic now, at first I just thought the author needed a break, but still nothing.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

This is a great story but you should look for someone to proof read your work as there is quite a few places that had mistakes or didn't make sense. Keep on writing as I like the idea of this story.

Can you time skip to their return please.

Don't you mean Nova and not Rina?