Blueflameh

Sorry I should fix my statement and add “usually” right behind the word “that.”

It’s quite good, there are a few leaps in logic but if you wonder why everyone thinks earth bending is clearly the strongest and most broken branch of bending look no further than this fanfic. I think the gravity bending is a jump in logic though. Also azula suddenly siding with the mc… I think there was still some story left to be told about aang and what he would do after finding out about the MC. I mean in a way he did exactly as azula said… although he killed very few she wasn’t entirely wrong… So IMO there was still a little bit that was left unsaid. However I think given that aang does enter the spirit world a few times he could’ve just ended things with the previous avatar speaking to aang. Well, overall it’s quite good a few things changed from sorce material but it’s a fanfiction and the author can and imo should do what they want.

I want to start with this, this ain’t for everyone. Personally I found this isn’t for me. However that’s just me I can definitely understand other people enjoying this. This story isn’t for everyone but I will say this is a good fanfiction that if you find interesting give it a read. It’s well written and there’s plenty good to say. I’m willing to say I just happened to not particularly enjoy this all that much that being said it’s still good. Great writing author.

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I didnt read past ch. 2 so my review doesnt reflect on the entire story. Ngl I dropped real quick. MC is 20, his first target is a pre jinchuriki kushina. Yes, kushina is not yet a jinchuriki and he instantly wanted to marry her… Kushina was probably 10 maybe younger. Definitely not older. So it may be a good story, he’ll if the author waited until she was 15 I’d probably be okay with it. So instantly chasing a 10 year old girl, I’m sorry. I can’t and won’t read this.

It’s an alright fanfiction, honestly not bad but not my cup of tea. The pacing of the story feels like you’re reviewing a movie by fast forwarding the slightly less but still important parts while only hitting the main plot points. So it takes a lot from the potential of the story. It’s how I imagine my own fanfic writing feels the others. Where you get the main points but not much passed that. So overall not bad, but I’m not going to say it’s good. Pretty mid but overall if you enjoy twilight you might enjoy it, if you don’t like twilight then… I’d say you can go without reading this.

So basically what companies tried to make NFT’s Yeah, honestly. I hope for a future video game comparable to RPO. Where you can do something like this… I also don’t want to live in a world like that… It’s an oxymoron. How can I want something and also dread its existence at the same time?