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See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

yeah, right, lol.

I'd first like to see an evidence that you've actually sat down and read the whole thing. Then I might consider. Otherwise it's most likely a half-hearted attempt at padding up your site's book count for free, which I deem quite disrespectful to authors.

The pacing is extremely fast I fear you might be shedding too much for the sake of pushing the plot. On the other hand tho, I guess that would appeal to today's readers. Downside is that this feels a bit like a barren log of character actions and dialogues, so I wish to see a bit more of meat added.

We all went through that awkward self-important, fantasy-ridden teen years, thinking "urgh, everyone is so stupid", "I'm so secretly special" and the first few chapters make us wonder if the MC is going through THAT phase. Turns out she is indeed special LOL. "It was nine. Nothing unthinkable was happening." I've read many stories on this site but this opening sentence triumphs over all. Pacing is good and chapters are at lengths digestible to today's readers. Super Squad is a name designed to be a jab at the cringy daydreamings we all had at least once, but the author takes it up to eleven which pushs the whole thing into the cool territory. You secretly want your teen fantasy come to life, this story delivers.

This chapter tells a lot about the Best family and its members, especially the MC, but not in a spoon-fed way. That's a promising display of good writing.

I had skipped the synopsis and dived right in. At first I thought it was going to be a "Sailor Moon"-esque stuff so the twist was rather refreshing. There are more than enough spots where, what I suspect to be auto-correct ( or may be auto-fill) messes it up so I suggest thorough proofreading. IIRC there's a movie coming out this year about a NPC in a MMO game becoming self-aware. You might wanna check that out and pick up one or two interesting ideas and elements to adopt into your story.

Slow and beautifully meticulous, with a hint of Easton Ellis and Fitzgerald but in a contemporary (and safe for work) 50 shades way. What impresses me the most is that the characters talk in ways that match their portrayed personalities, but at the same time the 'buddies' ooze a bit of group mentality shared in their small circle. It makes them feel so real. Such detail is an absolute gem, rarely seen in webnovel platforms. I'm gonna powerstone this!

I love this. It's like a Disney children's book that keeps going and going smooth like silk. The way things are narrated in a fairy-tale style more than makes it up for the grammar. I had initially planned to read maybe five or six chapters before writing a review, but couldn't stop. Big Kudos!

how long does it take for physicians from other kingdoms to arrive?