it's all about cultivation and getting stronger nothing else going on.The content is not rich in variety while a person getting stronger is nice to read but it's easy to get bored after some point if the story is just that.Him burning the kid was also unnecessary and just plain showed immaturity.Manners and politeness don't cost you anything but an insult can in the long term one day.Also learning politics and subtleties of intrigue is a must if you want to reach the top cause alone you get plotted against also you will see why the businessmen at top remain there when they benefit other powerful individuals or organisations who form an interest block. So overall while the premise was unique about him being born long before xiao yan.The plot and character design is very immature.So I am out but thank you for the creation as I know creating anything is a hard job.So best of luck to you.

Too much focus on what Chinese media say about him like who cares it serves no purpose.

Please don't call him a maniac he was a revolutionary who just fought for the greater good which other feeble minds failed to see.

Grindelwald was the greatest man that could have revolutionised wizards he was not a madman like Voldemort.He was also so right about the threats the muggles pose to the wizards and themselves too.Would love it if you finally make a work where the grandson of Grindelwald has enough balls to do something about muggles rather than building a good name for Grindelwald as there are many like that around.

does it have romance

That's great to hear it's a good story otherwise.My thing is whenever you imagine an adventurer in any culture they carry a gourd full or pouch with em.Especially sailors and their rum is the stuff of legends.When you are out alone in the dark wilderness a good drink just does wonders.

Him not smoking I can still accept but not even beer come on what kind of an adventurer who doesn't drink any beer.Not cool bro not cool.

This simp culture nowadays.

where can i find the raw or mtl of this?

So being dumb is ok according to you?

Tremor can destroy the whole world potentially it was mentioned by the author that whiteboard was restraining himself in Marineford to avoid friendly fire.Luffys fruit has op imagination power he can do whatever he wants basically change the fabric of reality.There are many other op fruits like gravity fruit.Even buggys fruit can work like crush magic of Gildarts if awekened.Then there are the bullshits such as the mythical zoans which have more unexplored potential.Stacking up against these it doesn't feel too op now does it?

A man must be an eunuch especially a powerful man who restricts himself to the whims of one woman.

I suggest using grammarly to write.It helps a lot.

Global Marital sect seriously ? Fix it bro.I think you meant Martial.Marital means marriage.

Good luck with the book but it's just not my cup of tea.I didn't come here to read about goody two shoe naive socialism lovers.But best of luck to you atleast the setting was fresh and interesting.

The huge usage of profanity is not good.If you are seriously writing a fantasy novel be mature about it and use good vocabulary.The constant usage of profanity in every few lines decreases the quality of the work otherwise a great start .Also I need to know if it's going to be a democracy nobles bad novel cause I came here with the title expecting a proper aristocratic structure with monarchy.I have seen all the modern corrupt democracy or ccp for one lifetime in real life.So far in modern world the citizens of monarchies are thriving.

What he meant was it's just a rehash of equality for all purebloods sucks story so far.You don't address the problems with muggleborns at all.They are like colonisers who go to another country and criticize their culture as backwards and barbaric.Also muggles and wizards can't coexist.Muggles if they find out about wizards will use them as weapons or experiment on them.Also wizards have long lives and they have a much more free society so of course they look down on muggles who discriminate on basis of caste,creed, religion, gender etc .Wizards have been all about gender equality from the beginning since there is no concept of physical society there since wands are the great Equalizer.

While the idea is fascinating the whole muggles and wizards coexisting is ridiculous.Humans like to think they are at the top of the food chain if they one day suddenly find out they are not they will either try to control the power wizards in this case or experiment on them to get the abilities themselves.So the whole idea is ridiculous.Also when you see the whole thing from a mature perspective the purebloods had some very good reasons to hate muggleborns.They were like European colonizers who go to another country spit on their traditions and culture as backwards barbaric.So of course the purebloods have every right to be mad.I think only Grindelwald had the right idea his process was too brutal but his objectives were correct.

Your grammar is super bad and your story despite having a decent plot is painful to read through.Unless you get yourself a good editor I don't really see a lot of people paying to support works of this quality.Honest review not personal attack.

more like gayest.