Zekt

Author here! I've gone through and rewritten a lot of the story, fixing numerous issues along the way. If you read the earlier version, I truly appreciate your support, and I also want to apologize if it wasn’t up to par. Maybe it's just hindsight after taking a break, but either way, I’ve put in the work to make it better. In light of these updates, I posted a chapter explaining that I would be deleting all previous reviews due to the rewrite. Many of those reviews were incredibly helpful in shaping the improvements, both in ways you can see and in more subtle changes. I want to take this opportunity to emphasize that I value constructive criticism. I will remove any reviews that don't contribute meaningfully to the discussion, even if they’re five stars. For example, comments like "This shit is ass" or "Mommy so five stars" aren’t helpful to anyone. I’m sure many of you have come across similar reviews on other stories and found them unhelpful in making your reading choices. I understand the importance of not wasting time, so I’ll do my best to keep an eye on such things. Finally, thank you for reading, and I hope you continue to enjoy the story! —Zekt

I think this chapter is one of the better ones!

Thank you for reading 🙏

So yeah, I think I can move the story faster now. I kinda feel like I’m ready to do more complex stuff. I’ll also in the next chapter and maybe the one after workout any kinks with the system which I know might seem pointless since the story is still in the beginning but let’s be honest I didn’t do a good job explaining it 😭😭😭

That's actually cool asf, I'm doing weapon research at the moment so any and all ideas are welcomed.

My goal recently is to make the chapters bigger and flow better but I haven't found the right way yet.