Taoist_Balance

I love the amount of detail and remember it's only to much detail when you have to explain the detail of the detail a detail is supposed to be descriptive and informative not confusing or convoluted it's straight to the poit and describes what happened

I don't have any feedback except I really love the story and characters so far it gives them emotions and not just make them robots and I love the pacing and creativeness of the setting it's realistic yet also a little fantasy I mean exploding nuts that is very cool concpt and I like it because it makes sense

I'm just wondering why are they panicking and already admitting defeat to cuber i thought rudra had grey backing him i would never give up anything on principle it's not rudras fault that the ai aloowed bombs anyway and it's not a glitch you should never back down when you are in the right when you back down you lose for the rest of your life the ability to be right you allow your self to be bullied or told you have to give up your thing that you worked for for something that you didn't

This story is really good I like it alot but there is one thing I don't understand and that is why did he not immediately use the watch to check if there threats against his and roy's family and themselves it makes no sense I thought sam took the job seroiusly but wh is there such a big flaw in his thinking especially after it predicted the miami heat game I would really like to know the reason also even though that is such a big plot hole I will still read because while the watch is a plot hole it can easily be fixed or rectified later in the story and also Sometimes you should give a story a chance after all no story is perfect starting out anyways well done and keep writing this story It's Intriguing and has lots of twists it's very hard to find this kind of writer and novel so good luck and happyness to you [img=recommend][img=update]

sad that you had to be homophobic when describing how the men were laying down i was hopeful to read this novel but i cant bring myself to support homophobia

I find it unrealistic that they wouldn't have guards on lookout over the battlefield while everyone is looting also even if they don't do that they can simply gather all the weapons armors bows and arrows and count them and compare to the number they had before they left resulting in disrepencies which would mean that they would get caught and punished

From the examples you have given it does not have the peircing power of a spear nor does it have the versatility of a sword that works on both edges and it also does not have the crushing power of true blunt weapons while yes it can have these types of characteristics due to the fact that a glaive can be made different but it will NEVER have all you just described which makes it not the kibg of all weapons it is just another weapon it is even worse than a poleaxe due to the fact that a polaxe can actually crush pierce and chop unlike a glaive which can not do all threee at the same time because if it were to do so it would become a polaxe and not a glaive