Andrew_Miheso

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Good start, however a correction you should note in the op universe mermaids when they reach a certain age can change btwn tail and legs. Check the enies lobby arc for clarification

This chapter lost me. The MC's thought process makes no sense

Interesting premise but the plot feels rushed and too unrealistic. None of it is believable and the characters make no sense. Each character behaves abnormally

Not enough chapters to warrant let alone demand a subscription. Build your story first and then gain loyal followers honestly and legitimately.

Author please stop being lazy and sensitive, you can't hope to please everyone there will always be critics and haters. Write with confidence and arrogance as every writer should have

You've lost me now, the book has lost all logic and reason

Why does the mc act of character? Does he forget he's a bustard

Your thoughts are all over the place, it's difficult to understand what's going on

The MC sounds pathetic. I'm out