Is this Brother Toby our Mc, if so, my previous comment is a false alarm

Seriously??? This early and we already have a love interest?

“He had money. A lot.” Why do he sound like a gold digger ?😂

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Just started reading, I'm intrigued by the synopsis but “He was a boy who was seen as murdered by society, a wicked one who killed his father.” I think it's supposed to be "who was seen as a murderer".

Author, you finally blessed this poor mortal with the chapter 😭😭

Thank for the information

This story is going downhill so........ Goodbye, I'm dropping this story.

He (Brian_Gallacher) summarized my criticism very well so I'll just copy and paste it. It has potential but ruined early 1 mc shifts to being 13 to quickly 2 mc focusing on bitcoin instead of other avenues of wealth 3 not clear on how much earned and how much spent ruins immersion 4 ex husband hired an expert yet a 13 year old defeated him easily without real expertise 5 not clear where set 6 illogical speed for earnings 7 why only focus on digital and not land etc 8 mc is multimillionaire yet you expect readers to believe he isn't getting more attention at school 9 mother follows everything he says because he says it 10 to many time skips

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π_ππ_ππ_ππ_π I'm crying for this masterpiece..................... ................... ............... ................... ............... ................... ............... ...................

Author where are you???? 😢😢😢😭

I want this! I need this! ......................................................................................................................................................................

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I think this story is very enjoyable however I feel like the characters are a bit bland and need a more character development. ..............................

Mc have an obsession with committing suicide by using tofu

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