LiLBoyHatake
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LiLBoyHatake6 months agoPostéBiased review of course, I’m a big fan of the world I’ve made up. I think there some a lot of unique aspects about this story. I hope that I can continue to develop the world and characters! Thanks!
- LiLBoyHatake8 months agoPosté
Worldbuilding like no other, plot twists aplenty, and one unkillable roach. Fantastic.
- LiLBoyHatake2 years agoCommenté
Praise be to The Fool!
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- LiLBoyHatake3 years agoRépondu à GifflarGod
Yea theres 0 depth to her rn
Ce paragraphe a été supprimé. - LiLBoyHatake3 years agoCommenté
No inspection of the property? Didnt even look at the financial model of the business?
- LiLBoyHatake3 years agoCommenté
This doesnt make sense, he has had a good atitude for the last 18 chaps. Throwing this in so quickly just makes it seem like ur scrambling for some type of conflict
- LiLBoyHatake3 years agoCommenté
Please use past tense!!!!
- LiLBoyHatake3 years agoCommenté
Really cliche sl far. Already forgetting the main plot is that the MC idles and becomes op.
