Angel_Light_2368

I stopped reading this due to being confused and annoyed by the sudden deaths. Rachel's character is really well done but I cant get into the whole storyline. The story has little to no information on world backgrounds. So very confusing. Rachel's character is what got my interests but I'm begining to second guess this story. Too quick and full of grammatic errors and bad sentences. Got a headache trying to be patient in each arc. Nice try.

Ummmmm....I'm VERY confused on what is happening. So, im just gonna drop this. Bye.