Incognito0001

I dislike how often the author feels the need to write his thoughts inside the chapters. There's 4th wall and there's this.. whatever this is. Makes the novel feel cheap and unimersive. Also the way he portrays the original feels very sloppy, like I get it usually in this genre they make the original mc look hypocritical etc. but this is just levels bellow of how it should be done, just sloppy work, make the plot make sense? Like I get it you intentionally want to show that it doesn't make sense but you missed the mark along the way. 2.8 rating and I am being slightly generous. Waste of time

when I saw his talents I chose the same, sniper assasin in swordsman world doesn't sound that bad 😏

Dax

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bit weird to say "wait" but sometimesntou do have same or similar dreams

I will drop the book if he doesn't unlock all of them

I don't particularly think the story is bad or anything just that I am the wrong audience. I find extra/background char becoming real MC stories entertaining and fun, but this one in particular felt very annoying to read? 🤔 Like good % of the chapters are mostly useless words/fillers and the important parts are vit frustrating to read and when I open comments the authoe writes "It gets better" well 180 chapters in it still hasn't 👏 😀

The story is mid but the translation makes it unreadable because character names and pronouns are all over the place