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Daoist_Lake

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2019-06-07 JointIndonesia
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  • Daoist_Lake
    Daoist_Lake18h
    Commenté

    Confession?!

    "Yes. I will tell you honestly. I have been afraid of you. I avoided fighting you, Morrigu, the Phantom Queen that brings death, and your Twelve Zodiac's Guardians. I felt fear at the prospect of fighting the great warriors who were united under your leadership as well. I was afraid, shivering, and I thought of you both while I was awake and in my dreams. I have no intention of denying my cowardice back then. It is all true."
    Haru & Naru ~ Love is a Comedy
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Orange_Naru
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  • Daoist_Lake
    Daoist_Lake1d
    Commenté

    Ahh... My little wish become true in this chapter. Thank You For The Chapter

    Ch 130 Welcome Home, Tsun Tsun (4)
    Haru & Naru ~ Love is a Comedy
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Orange_Naru
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  • Daoist_Lake
    Daoist_Lake3d
    Répondu à Mitsurei_Raizen

    Too many Perfect Character with Perfect Body in Korean LN, like formula : For Men must have 6666 rule (6 pack abs, 6 figure salary, 6 feet tall, 6 inch D), and for Women they must have 8 Hourglass body, and brain rot. Until i think its not Korean People actually in reality. With that formula, its really not suprising author always make depressing ending, because author want make reader attach to beautiful/handsome died character or sympaty to MC suffering. But for me, its already Mainstream. because i already know, author always Break The Death Rule : Easy Resurrection, Rebirth, Regress, Loop, or have any magic to make died character alive again, to reach happy ending or sacrifice MC to make happy ending for other Character.

    Jean can only frown after seeing the world he is going to go. He didn't know whether to feel relieved or panicked. Jean can remember at least how the plot goes. He is not exactly a die hard fan who can remember all of the details as he drop the novel on its final arc because of how stretchy and the relationship Hajin have with Nayun is hurting his head. The world is kind of like Solo leveling but instead of fighting the ruler's or the monarch there will be a demon king that will descend. (A/N: I legit got a headache when reading about Hajin and Nayun relationship.)
    Transmigrate In The Novel Extra
    Anime et bandes dessinées · I_d0nt_kn0w
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  • Daoist_Lake
    Daoist_Lake8d
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    Nice Story. Keep it on Library. I think MC has a potential to be Good Neutral Character. I just hope MC not so Over Power and MC can death if he make mistake in battle. Background story for MC with another Character is good, they (MC and His Friend) still think and act like toddler, its a good Point for me. Really i just hope MC is not so OP because it will ruin MC friendship and MC background. at least i hope MC friend can keep up with MC in term Battle Power.

    Rebirth in Konoha: The Leaf Surgeon
    Anime et bandes dessinées · AraXiel_21
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  • Daoist_Lake
    Daoist_Lake8d
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    Uwogghh! Ruby Route is very interesting! What a wholesome story. But problem-solving between Ruby & Weiss kind rush, i think they will have big fight (only my imagination to make storyline more wide, don't mind it).

    Ch 126 Ruby & Weiss 8
    Haru & Naru ~ Love is a Comedy
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Orange_Naru
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  • Daoist_Lake
    Daoist_Lake14d
    Répondu à Orange_Naru

    Yes. I think its storyline still good. I'am.. just sad can't read again Var vs Oezelia. Thanks for explanation.

    Ch -11 In the World of Midgar 50 — Hero Summoning (4)
    Haru & Naru ~ Love is a Comedy
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Orange_Naru
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  • Daoist_Lake
    Daoist_Lake15d
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    Huhuhu... Chapter 51,52,53 already deleted😭.Why?

    Ch -11 In the World of Midgar 50 — Hero Summoning (4)
    Haru & Naru ~ Love is a Comedy
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Orange_Naru
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  • Daoist_Lake
    Daoist_Lake18d
    Répondu à BridgeToHeavens

    Done. But i drop it half-way.

    Ch 3 'Cube'
    Transmigrate In The Novel Extra
    Anime et bandes dessinées · I_d0nt_kn0w
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  • Daoist_Lake
    Daoist_Lake19d
    Répondu à BridgeToHeavens

    Novel Extra Nobody by Alfir. i don't know its suit with you taste, because its No-Harem Sect.

    Ch 3 'Cube'
    Transmigrate In The Novel Extra
    Anime et bandes dessinées · I_d0nt_kn0w
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  • Daoist_Lake
    Daoist_Lake19d
    Répondu à I_d0nt_kn0w

    Thanks. i hope you not discourage to write again because this review. I already read many Novel Extra fanfic. And i know many of Novel Extra fanfic is drop, because author put too many Buff to their MC, and have Flawless Personality, so story arc in Canon Novel Extra become short because MC can easy solve Canon Novel Extra Conflict. And they don't know how to put Good Filler Chapter outside from Novel Extra Storyline. That why Perfect MC + Flawless MC always boring and not attract anything (except, you can write Canon Female Lead with interesting Personality, and have good compability with your MC)

    Ch 3 'Cube'
    Transmigrate In The Novel Extra
    Anime et bandes dessinées · I_d0nt_kn0w
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  • Daoist_Lake
    Daoist_Lake19d
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    I just want write review. This fanfic Will have Boring Phase. Your MC already Invincible (Immortality from Ajin), has knowledge about future plot, and good looking. If you put Calm Protagonist Template to your MC, this MC already Perfect Human. He don't need Character Development except training, because he already has Perfect Personality. Its Will boring story for me. Atleast you must put some weakness to MC, so he will know learning from mistake or something.

    Ch 3 'Cube'
    Transmigrate In The Novel Extra
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  • Daoist_Lake
    Daoist_Lake19d
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    You must know many Korea LN is has : Good Start > Repeating Mid Arc > Bad Ending Conclusion.

    Jean can only frown after seeing the world he is going to go. He didn't know whether to feel relieved or panicked. Jean can remember at least how the plot goes. He is not exactly a die hard fan who can remember all of the details as he drop the novel on its final arc because of how stretchy and the relationship Hajin have with Nayun is hurting his head. The world is kind of like Solo leveling but instead of fighting the ruler's or the monarch there will be a demon king that will descend. (A/N: I legit got a headache when reading about Hajin and Nayun relationship.)
    Transmigrate In The Novel Extra
    Anime et bandes dessinées · I_d0nt_kn0w
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  • Daoist_Lake
    Daoist_Lake22d
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    CorrupTobi

    Naruto lived in a low income apartment and barely got enough money a month to survive on cheap food and junk. Not to mention that people still glared at him and treated him poorly even after i started hanging around and "kindly" convincing them of his good nature. Needless to say learning that someone, Hokage especially, was supposed to be taking care of him yet he lived in that condition left me less than happy, No I was VERY unhappy. My anger must have caused my power to slip out a little as the wood counter creaked and began to crack under my grip as I stared the old man down.-
    Naruto-The secret sage
    Anime et bandes dessinées · loskro
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  • Daoist_Lake
    Daoist_Lake23d
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    Thank You for the Chapter. I really love Ruby in this story😍

    Ch 99 Yozora Ruby 2
    Haru & Naru ~ Love is a Comedy
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Orange_Naru
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  • Daoist_Lake
    Daoist_Lake30d
    Commenté

    Hahaha... It's true. Very common nowdays Fanfic and Light Novel. For convenience make storyline and plot armor

    Ce paragraphe a été supprimé.
    Haru & Naru ~ Love is a Comedy
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  • Daoist_Lake
    Daoist_Lake1mth
    Répondu à Orange_Naru

    Thank You Very Much. I hope you always healthy and can have time to write this fanfic until end. If Ending haven't decided. I really hope you can make Single Route, and Harem Route. Thank you for your hard work. Good to read this fanfic/original story.

    Haru & Naru ~ Love is a Comedy
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Orange_Naru
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  • Daoist_Lake
    Daoist_Lake1mth
    Répondu à Orange_Naru

    Yeah. My regret is i don't read it before you Reupload. its already 100 chapter😭

    Haru & Naru ~ Love is a Comedy
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Orange_Naru
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  • Daoist_Lake
    Daoist_Lake1mth
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    You do a good job. Really, this is perfect story for me. Even you use Anime Character as template, i know its for reader can imagine how your Character expression they personality, its completely different from any Fanfic Story. Each Character have unique personality, and contrast each other. And what i love about this story, all Main Character or Side Character is not perfect, they complement each other. Even Story Development progress with good Narative each Chapter. I don't know how to explain it anymore. For me this really Good Story and Good Character. I can't have opinion for Writing Quality/Update/World Background, its not my speciality.

    Haru & Naru ~ Love is a Comedy
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Orange_Naru
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  • Daoist_Lake
    Daoist_Lake1mth
    Répondu à kingchad420

    He don't want Fame.

    Ch 14 Chapter 14 : Laxus!!
    Fairy Tail: I Am Not The Most Terrifying Wizard
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Ani_Scout
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  • Daoist_Lake
    Daoist_Lake1mth
    Répondu à Cozmic_Dragon

    Thank You. i just hope, MC don't steal all Xiao Yan's Women

    Btth: Tie Xiao Xun'er at the beginning and get ten times feedback
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