great great quality and for free as well it's unexpected because most authors don't do that the story caught my attention in a way that most don't it was unique and new I can see myself reading more of it

this is my bread and butter when It it comes to novels these are the ones I read most. writing quality and character build are both amazing. keep it up author

positively amazing novel it is growing more and more with every chapter it keeps me pulled in and makes me want more. fantastic job authors keep it up

will get to you soon. thank you for review

let me get home and I will review yours

thank you so much lol I wrote it at work so I'll revise it at home

can you re read the two prologues to see if it helped

a masterpiece through and through. taking your advice on my novel being to fast paced and rushed I'll be adding a prologue. but your book is amazing and has helped me with some pacing issues. keep it up authors

first of this book reminds me of a webtoon that I loved from the character to the new school. it makes me want to root on the character and stay with the book. keep it up

just the intro threw me for a twist with compelling into and character description it makes the reader (me) want to dive in and read more I added you to collection keep it up.

will get your soon. thank you

the spacing is to large it makes the writing choppy in my opinion and it stops the reader from flowing from one part to the other

I see alot of the same in your novel as well the story is phenomenal but the spacing and writing quality hold it back slightly. I would suggest reading some authors books who have a similar pace and working from there. and adding a prologue chapter of an event to pull reader in.. keep it up

absolutely a masterpiece when it comes to a love triangle and neat writing it pulls the reader along and makes sure they can feel everything going on

no it's one body. but it was a split soul

it is a very unique story with hidden desires and flaws. both the main characters show a really interesting emotions. the world building and detail are superb.

alright as a huge lover of Eastern fantasy and cultivation novels I have to say that yours is among the best I have read in terms of grown and potential as long as you stick with it. I'm rooting for you keep it up please

the world you set up is unique in its own way. I do think that you should run it through an editor app or a editor due to run on sentences and improve on inner thought and outer thought writing so it is easier to follow for a reader. and I suggest smaller paragraphs for those who read on mobile phones it makes it hard to read

don't worry that is just the system I have decided on as an author. all those who become mages go through a body refinement, sorry I am a fan of eastern cultivation novels

ok first starting off I have to state that this is out of my usual cup of tea. it has a really good use of first person and it is unique in the use of verbal communication it allows each character to have a life of its own and not the same repeated word. I have to say it's an amazing book keep it up.