uwogg let's goo, btw take your time authors or maybe some rest, you're pushing yourself too hard until now

I'll go here instead then, and whats your name on qq?

peak story, tftc

yeeaa, the boss deserve it

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wow, nice one author. thanks for the chappy

thanks for the chapter

thank youu

holy, nice world building you got there author

Good fanfic, just read it and you'll know why. Excellent world building and interesting character. Maybe for some other its not their cup of tea, but for many it is. Storytelling is top notch also, no nonsense all things explained through fully. Hope you will continue this till the end. May good luck and health bestowed upon you author, thank you for the great story

its okay, your writing id loveable and i like the mc character its not a problem he is blind or not, i even read a mc whos body is a literally bug. so write story as you deem fun, dont let people judge you

and the MC tho, on few first chapter he seems very egoistic, bratty, and ungrateful boy that think all about himself. but when the fmc comes in he doesn't care whatever they're doing to him and just accept. i know it seems like a character development but......, just doesn't feels right

yeah i also thought the same, i find mostly all the female characters is very unlikeable on how they behave

MC is pushover imo, and i dont really like how he taking care of things. But hey, im not a type of person who hate a book because the author doesn't have same view as me, so solid 5 stars. Grammar is on the good side if we compare on average HP fanfic(at least for me, non english speakers), story and world building is good not boring, pace is also good, no nonsense all things explained through fully little note tho, all the female "heroine" is a meh for me, very ungrateful and unlikeable in my books. Hagrid is wayyy more likeable lmao in this book, rather have hagrid as heroine *nohomo. But I'll see how its going for now keep it up author, thank you

agreed

i had good laughs, thank you random person on internet

hey, maybe you will interested on warlock of magus world novel way of invade another world, maybe the methods used there can fix some of your MC power balancing issue when he is already too powerful. I'll made it short, basically MC can send a piece of his soul to act as him into a body of character on that world then the MC controls it, and start as brand new with some power from his main body(scale it as you want) when hard times come MC can just rely on his plot armor(main body) or you can just think anything on this. Also if you afraid of his clone out of control, don't worry cause practically that clone is himself and can merge again, don't forget that clone is his piece of soul

I'm not critique so my review only based on how i enjoy this book. Good grammar at least for me, maybe sometimes the way he solve thing not perfect but, hey this is how the story unfold. overall very enjoyable read

Translation pretty decent still bearable than mtl, thanks for translating it. The story below average, using hikigaya as template but feels like different person, all characters have iq lowered somehow. my rating will be 5, not for the author but for the translator that giving his time to translate this

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