Dtaco9775

I really love fan fiction, but come on man, get your source material straight😆

aren't her sisters name Citron and cinnamon

Incredibly ambitious . I'm looking forward to how the author plans to integrate the shear volume of characters and worlds

I like em thick[img=recommend]

did I miss something, what happened to Nigel? He was a big part of the story but he disappeared.

I wasn't paying close attention to the words and saw Mighty Ducks kick. I had to quickly reread before I realized it Lol

use the power to make light constructs like yellow lantern from DC, invisibility

only major criticism is when jumping between the hollow video, to present its unclear, so its hard to follow conversations happening in the videos, as opposed to present conversations. more clear indications could be added to clarify the dialogue.

f@@@c, I was getting chills at that last moment. Then BAM, another cliff dropped on my head.

This story is just WOW. So may Superman in Marvel stories out there and this is by far the best written. The world development between characters and situations between Marvel and DC is seamless. It really feels like Superman originated in this world. instead of trying to stuff him into it like other stories. Love it so far.