LuxShi

This is just an exact copy of the fanfic Harry Potter: Lost Son but incredibly drawn out. Taking 30 chapters to reach the same progress as chapter 4 in the original. I'd recommend checking out the original at least to get much further ahead.

This is an exact, word-for-word copy of the fanfiction "Harry Potter: Lost Son." I don't know if you are the original author and are just now posting it again on Webnovel. But either way, the fact that you are drawing out the chapters to such an extent is ridiculous. It took 30 chapters here to get to the same point as 4 chapters on Harry Potter: Lost Son. I assume it's to build up the chapter count and have an excess of chapters on your Patreon you are so heavily advertising. Overall very distasteful whether you're the actual author or not.

When I first started reading this I expected another generic story about a self-insert with Superman's suite of powers in the world of Invincible. And while there may be a hint of that here, I genuinely enjoy this. Every time I finish a chapter I want more and quickly scroll to the next chapter. Currently, I'm on chapter 21, and when I reached the end and realized it was the final chapter I quite literally said "No!" Author, I genuinely enjoy this story and desperately crave more! Prioritize your life over this of course but I beg of you, I need about 500 more chapters within two days. This is indeed a threat!!

That was when Brandon started acting cryptic though, with his creepy drawings and after he had already killed someone, or at least after he had attacked someone already.

Cash register, right. Is this translated or something?

To start with, this is a fantastic fanfiction and I am enjoying it thoroughly. Simply put, if you like reading about a journey through fame from the bottom to the top you should read this! Now for the criteria for rating this: Translation Quality: Doesn't really apply here the English is fantastic and I honestly haven't found any grammatical errors while casually reading through this. Stability of Updates: Thus far at chapter 31 the frequency of updates seems rather satisfactory, though admittedly I would love to read hundreds of chapters at once. But alas the author is a human and cannot release chapters at such a pace. Story Development: One thing I can say is that it started off rather quickly with no real-time beforehand to solidly build up a notable introduction. But I will say that thus far the story has been moving at a very satisfying pace and I find the quickness at the beginning to be a good thing rather than a hindrance. Character Design: As far as up to chapter 31 I can confidently say that all of the characters introduced thus far are not paper thin but rather seemingly all have their own thoughts and feelings. The bonds and feelings shared between the characters can really pull at you and make you quite emotional. World Background: As it's anchored in reality and the past, there isn't much needed to further build up the world as it has already happened, allowing one to easily look back on what occurred. Thus far, though, the world feels real and not some kind of hand-drawn background that makes things feel untethered and messy. In conclusion, read it. Author, if you read this, more chapters pls!

Though there are only a few chapters now when compared to longer Hollywood esc fanfics I am loving it so far. Loving it so far! I wish I could binge-read hundreds of chapters haha!

We seem to have rather similar tastes in reading material, would you happen to have any Singer/Hollywood type fanfictions or even originals to suggest? Thank you in advance!

Hey author I really like this story, why did you delete some of the chapters? Furthermore, why did you rename it and remove the picture? You okay?

Been a year bro, hope you're alright! Also hope for those chapters soon!