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I’m really enjoying the story. It’s quite well written. I personally like the whole Minecraft aspect of it. I don’t know a lot about Minecraft probably the only gamer in the world that never really got into Minecraft. I’m enjoying your version and how you mixing that aspect into your MC’s world. The only negative thing I have to say is your MC seems to be too hopeful and helpful. I’ll be honest with you I kind of like MC’s they are kind prideful. I’m glad he’s starting to show a bit of ambition, but it sometimes feels like he’s being dragged to have ambition instead of that’s just part of his personality. The helping in the north was bizarre and I thought that was out of place.

Good story I like your MC. I like your main character having ambition, and being cautious. I’m glad that he’s paranoid but honestly, he shouldn’t be. Rick wouldn’t care if somebody took over Jerry. As long as Morty Beth and Summer isn’t messed with. I could actually see Rick assisting Jerry a tiny bit if he believe that this would have Jerry leave Beth. Rick would make sure Jerry knew the only reason he’s intelligent was because he stole Rick’s knowledge.

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This is just copying posting (Dodging Prison and Stealing Witches - Revenge is Best Served Raw by LeadVonE)

Good chapter good fight. I mean Harry in his world is equal to Voldemort if I’m not mistaken. Everyone in this world seems to be weaker since they don’t have a family crust and family magic. So it would make sense that Harry would dominate Voldemort and even this Dumbledore.

You’re doing a good job of portraying canon Harry. Canon Harry is way too trusting of Dumbledore for no apparent reason from start. Harry’s desperation for kindness made him believe almost everything. Hagrid said, and if Hagrid said good things about people, then he was willing to believe it without any evidence. As soon as somebody says, they like Dumbledore and they’re against Voldemort Harry trust them. I always wondered too if canon Harry would actually respond positively if somebody defeated Voldemort for him. As much as he complains about Voldemort in the situation, I think some sense can, and Harry enjoys the fame and the specialness that he holds, probably because he was mentally abused to think low of himself all his life. So I can see canon Harry being resentful for anyone sidelining him and defeating Voldemort.

Good chapter like seeing that the story is progressing. How much you wanna bet that Rob with encouragement of his mother is preparing to betray Lux. I hope he doesn’t show them mercy this time. That weirwood tree in Winterfell is probably thirsty and could use some Andal blood. Personally, the only Lannister I actually like and respect is Tywin. Everything he did if you truly think about it was to strengthen his house and consequences of it would’ve strengthened the realm. Killing the Targaryen royal children was a very smart thing to do. He could’ve done it without being so cruel, but they needed to die. I hope he captured Robert early in the war and has Robert’s hands and feet cut off and chain him to his throne. People who come to petition Luke’s we’ll see the ex King of Westrose slowly starving and begging for scraps. I hope he beat Cersei until she’s a cowering rabbit. Then have her dress in her finery and have her scrub the throne room floors, specially when he has guests arriving.

God do I hate Jon Snow. He betrayed the only other family member other than Arya that treated him as an equal. He was a spineless worm in the show towards the end. I’ll admit, Im a Daenerys fan. Personally I wish she followed the queen of thorns advice, and burnt any house that didn’t bend the knee. She’s was so afraid of being like her father, that she forgot how her ancestor forge the seven kingdoms into one realm. I cheered when she burnt down Kings Landing. She should not have gone there to restore her crown, but to conquer the continent anew. Maybe this Jon won’t be so stupid and easily led by the nose since he won’t have the horrible misfortune of being raised by one of the dumbest person in Westrose. PS: Please no Tyrion, I think it would ruin it if I have to hear Tyrion pretending to be smarter than he actually is and the other times feeling sorry for himself.

Good chapter I actually like his interaction with Sirius Black. Black is the best character in Harry’s life. I hope he’ll survive pass this year.

I don’t understand people like of Dumbledore. The man openly admitted that he supported child abuse. I’m not 100% sure of all the abuse that Harry went through, but we do know he was hit by a frying pan and things in the house was thrown at him by his aunt. He was strangled multiple times by his Uncle. He was regularly and physically beaten by his cousin and his friends. Canon Harry was starved, held in solitary confinement, and mentally tormented with Dumbledore’s approval. For anyone to excuse that specially from an educator is unconscionable. No matter what good he’s done a person who can find nothing wrong with putting a child through that is not a good person.