Sleepy_H3ad

i second this, ur right on tht

bro ..

okay i change my mind, it's not some weird Chinese author shit

now this is a plot hole, that weird logic of Chinese authors

land of soup, i can't force myself tu believe that u really translated this novel urself, and u offer them a patron sub...wow the audacity...webnovel is getting worse by the day.

well what do we expect from this type of Chinese novel, we rarely got good fanfiction novel from them.

tf, all that for this, it's weird...it's way to early for such a big change, and u need tu add other POV, that's gonna make the sudden changes alot better

bro, don't copy someone else story and selling them................................................................................................

it's way tu bland...

the end.