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hello author,Are you planning on setting up Brenda with Adrian or what?
please just give them a happy ending and No NTR on MC I hope
Author,The story is good but I want to know if the MC will marry females and dual cultivate with them or he will just fuk around with random women like a certain novel named Dual Cultivation.can I expect romance in this novel or not?
yes you did clarify but I am thinking if you could just reveal the whole matter in around 300th chapter and just resurrect or reincarnate do something about it.I am feeling MC's pain in my chest.
I read till 81 chapters
Hello Author,The story is really great but can you please explain how did his first died and was raped or something and can she be resurrected with some ultra op methods. Please clarify this I know you are new to this but there are some things you didn't explain correctly so I am losing my excitement to read.
Author browhen do you plan to reunite him with his family ?please make It fast or atleast tell me on how many chapters will it take to reunite them I am dying to know I will wait until chapters stack up then read.By the way the novel is great keep it up but can you make MC a little emotional or atleast romantic I feel like he is all about transactions during seggs.
see author bro I don't have any personal grudge against you or anything but I honestly think that this novel could have been way better.And you are saying noNTR but MC has already been NTRed when his fiance was stolen and he couldn't do anything and the women he fell in love become his stepsister and she got engaged to another man isn't that considered NTR and his mother was also taken by another man and If read correctly Austin and MC are both young so that is also considered NTR in my book.And another ridiculous thing is how can a mother even if she goes to another man and fucks with him Even if that happens how can she even not care about her child and she doesn't even contact him when it's already very late .Bro I recommend that you make changes in story so that it makes impact on rankings.
The story could have been a lot better if the author had invested some more time in thinking I mean How could the MC mother abandon him for another man when she is clearly stronger (don't stronger people have strong minds) and Irina's father just said to her you are making a mistake and in confrontation between father and daughter chapter he is thinking that his daughter has been manipulated fucking ridiculous.Even if author is explaining his reasons for the cause still it is ridiculous I mean His grandfather is a Martial Emperor even he couldn't find anything strange why doesn't he just commit suicide if he can't even think clearly. Just the whole fucking world is influenced by a bunch of villains and heroes with systems and there is our mc with neutral system which negates villains and heroes halo and to top it off he suffers more than his previous life and he is going to suffer even more later.I mean he can't be even be sure if his girls will cuckold him for hero and villains halo he is very weak.