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Monsterkind01

Monsterkind01

Lv14
2019-05-04 JointGermany
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  • Monsterkind01
    Monsterkind0110mth
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    quite a good start into a Harry Potter teacher story of which there are way too few out there. I hope it will not be abandoned like so many good stories on this platform.

    Hp: hogwarts history teacher
    Livres et littérature · legionnaire
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  • Monsterkind01
    Monsterkind0110mth
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    what a miserable failure. The protagonist should be an intelligent character, but already in chapter 4 , the health roboter talks about Chinese medicine and kidney yang deficit. WTF? Why? everybody knows that traditional medicine (Ayurveda, homoeopathy, and so on) is mostly imaginary (Placebo), and even if not, medicine today is way more effective.

    Marvel: Little Genius
    Films · Lightreaper
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  • Monsterkind01
    Monsterkind011yr
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    Ha, nice. I also went to the TU in Munich [img=recommend]

    "Yeah, two of them. Timothy and Walter. Timothy graduated from Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute and Walter is an immigrant from the German Empire, graduating from the Technical University of Munich. Though Timothy has this prideful and cocky attitude, he has the brains to back it up."
    Creating an Industrial Empire in 19th Century Parallel World
    Histoire · SorryImJustDiamond
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  • Monsterkind01
    Monsterkind011yr
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    Nice start keep up the good work hopefully it will not be a one-shot I will give a better review once there are more chapters online.

    Harry Potter: The Wand Maker
    Livres et littérature · MichaelEast
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  • Monsterkind01
    Monsterkind011yr
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    A good Start to a grand adventure that will hopefully go on for a while. I can not review the updating stability because of the few chapters I will change it once more than 50 chapters are published.

    Revan Returns
    Films · Nartleb
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  • Monsterkind01
    Monsterkind011yr
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    Good start into the Story. I think it will be a wish fulfilment story so if you like this kind of books you schuld read it. I hope the author can hold the updating stability, there are already to many lost gems in the webnovel library.

    Star Wars A Galaxy Reborn
    Autres · Dr_Dred
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  • Monsterkind01
    Monsterkind011yr
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    Unbelievable how an author can destroy a good book. The first 100 chapters are very god but after that there is nothing just wish fulfilment and not the good kind no development ... The biggest mistake is the world change it makes no sense, why go back to the modern or real world? it is just not fun reading anymore and has nothing to do with the good parts of this book 20 or so chapters in the real world would have been ok but there is just no end to it. save your money it is not worth the 30 dollars

    Martial God Gamer
    Oriental · CrazeNovel
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  • Monsterkind01
    Monsterkind011yr
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    quite the good story about an OC without Reinkarnation i hope this will not be an oneshot and this story will be continued, it would be quite the shame if such a good start will not get an equally good ending.

    HP: The Book of the Wise
    Livres et littérature · Bored_Hermes
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  • Monsterkind01
    Monsterkind011yr
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    maybe " Yoda just watched her while thinking how curious this event is before entering meditation to ask the force for an answer. " sorry for bad English but this could be an reference.

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    Code Name - Angel of Death
    Anime et bandes dessinées · MrMaddog
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  • Monsterkind01
    Monsterkind011yr
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    "Yoda just watched her ..." I do not think the word herself is fitting here

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  • Monsterkind01
    Monsterkind011yr
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    and"feeling his location I can't " should be better for reading

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  • Monsterkind01
    Monsterkind011yr
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    gone through something painfull would be better I think.

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  • Monsterkind01
    Monsterkind011yr
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    I really like this start or background however you might call it. Please just don't be discouraged by few readers most readers won't start reading story's until 50 or more chapters are written. I really hope that these two chapters won't be the last ones.

    Code Name - Angel of Death
    Anime et bandes dessinées · MrMaddog
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    Anime et bandes dessinées · DevourerOfSouls
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  • Monsterkind01
    Monsterkind012yr
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    A good story that I hope will be continued. It is well written not to much errors, has a good story with a developed main caracter.

    Flipping the Galaxy
    Films · Daonexus
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