Harrowdaddy

If you haven’t already I suggest you have a series of notes detailing important information that you can look back on when writing your story to help you keep things grounded

Had plenty of time to remedy that. Great novel so far but he’s only alive rn because of plot and sheer luck

Run like hell

Even his own sister is slowly being against him

More than likely the third child

This makes no sense… the novel portrays the MC as being average in looks yet the girls he interacts with seem to all want him yet the girls that are side characters seem to hate him. So what is it exactly, is he handsome or average

Now that you mention it I’m seeing the resemblance

It’s been days I don’t think they’re gonna notice anytime soon

I keep seeing the word deliberate so often I’m starting to wonder if everyone in this novel are deliberate Walkers who can somehow travel the length of an entire city oth just slow steps

The chapter she was first introduced, I don’t know if it’s really bullying but she basically always said he caused Elize to give up her youth and freedom for him