It’s not bad but you can tell that it’s a copy of soccer anime’s and the other novel on here Greatest Of All Time.
It’s good but the main weakness is it lacks originality and the characters progress too fast and are compared to world class players at 6
So his face is gonna be normal again right I’m sorry for asking again after you answered his question also the romance interest part sounds great please answer
It really doesn’t matter now but I agree with this statement I just feel like it’s important for sabo to be int revolutionary army cuz now who’s in the revolutionary army main character (Jackson ) is just greedy