Wackle

One thing I have found nagging on this story, and I'm not targeting the author about, the grammar has to improve. My brain cells refuse to move past the first chapter, but acknowledges that there is a decent plot and a promising future developement. The Character has the same run-of-the-mill start, he dies and gets isekai'd. Though when I read something I need a clean story with punctuation and great update times. Other than that I could see this story blossom in the future.

In the bottom of this paragraph the “found” should be a “find” it annoys english teachers and me...

Lol

Also let me use my passes and stuff On here to support you

Bruh continue this series! U start making more reeee-???!!’9?