Aces_Mark

both and i think dany is the obvious answer

make him tom riddle

Unfortunately i actually think this was necessary the real good points of story are always the growth process and overcoming obsticules. Being an OP MC is only fun to read for so long, it gets boring real fast.

I think your doing good, you seem into world building and setting up exposition still so it would only make sense that it would take a while for to heat up.

Tyfc

To be honest have not read this yet, but love Skyrim. However, I am skeptical of AI written books so I'm going to wait for some more review too get the scoop before I invest my time in.

too short

I know this is a translation but i want to thank you for removing most of the poison that Chinese people put in their novels this is way better.

Can you clarify how the original author ruined it?

Can you clarify i seem to not see the message?