Zachary_Fort

thanks for the chapter! I'm loving the story, and love how the skellies are getting Roles. it's adding a lot of dimension for them to grow as characters, and we can bond more with the level 3 skellies more. quick note: in the very first paragraph, it says "treant" when it should say "dihexapede" (please forgive any spelling errors)

I'm sorry to hear that! I'll keep your work in my Reading list. I'm excited for any updates, and I'll be in the lookout for some updates!

I like the explicit, dark tones. the emotional pain that comes from empathizing with these suffering characters gives more depth to the story. it also gives more hate towards your villains. it's up to you on how graphic you illustrate the scenes, but I think they should be kept. also, the more graphic, the more pain/hate the scenes generate

I really hope this book comes back. this is exactly the genre I have been looking for, and you've done an amazing job so far, Author.

I agree. I was reading comments to find one that put into words what I was thinking. this is it.

thanks for chapter. I'll start voting over here, rather than CO

yessss!!! third strata!

more Odin! lots more! I could take a spin off novel of Odin. same universe, same beardy Gandalf... I think that would be sweet. that being said, this novel has been one heck of a ride. loved every chapter! keep it up!

jake xi Sarah will tim

1. Jake 2. Hakkarasha 3. Sarah 4. Will 5. Bawopi