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I'm awesome and as Keanu Reeves said and I quote, " You're Breathtaking!"

2019-03-19 JointUnited States
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  • grimmhorizon
    grimmhorizon6h
    Commenté

    so basically a copy paste with character design changes

    Ch 2 Zark Ar Zathot
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    The Lord
    Fantaisie · WarSon
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  • grimmhorizon
    grimmhorizon2d
    Répondu à Great_maid_Oni

    naw the pvts would indeed get a promotion or a medal .

    Ch 40 Promotion and skepticism
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    Godfather System
    Films · NewComer714
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  • grimmhorizon
    grimmhorizon4d
    Répondu à NewComer714

    easiest way is to just type in Google the year 1943 ww2( and the subject,i.e ship transport, military ranks and companies, the jobs and what that job entailed) the readers have no clue what your unit is. are you infantry, airborne, supply, armor unit( tanks) bc depending on which unit your with depends on what task you'll be assigned. which then decides what roll you would be doing in battle. ( thanks would generally be assigned as backup for ground troops ( but a fuckton of red tape to shoot anything that aren't in line of sight troops)if your transportation unit your job was to drive everywhere to supply the front lines,(super dangerous back then) administration your platoon would be stuck doing dumb minimal reports of reports ,drills, would hardly ever see a fight. that's just the in your face military stuff. but if you want the how soldiers would react or behave and know about the stupid shit NCOs and officers make their soldiers do then you'll need to ask a vet. it takes alot more then what you describe in basic for regular soldiers to respect him as a leader(minus the guys who helped the murder) you could always ask me if you dont know anyone. I may get some shit wrong about ww2 but all the dumb shit soldiers put up with I can give 100%facts

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    Godfather System
    Films · NewComer714
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  • grimmhorizon
    grimmhorizon4d
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    ok its pretty good... now for all my fellow veterans.... I have to warn you. they are a lot of flaws in the military chapters. to give a example the mc is a 2nd Lt and acts like his platoon is a company and he's the company

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    Godfather System
    Films · NewComer714
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  • grimmhorizon
    grimmhorizon4d
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    they're basically 2 types of ships used during ww2 to transport soldiers. ..military ships and civilian ships(cruise ships for example) were commandeered for war use.both had soldiers assigned to operate the ship and GUNS! the civilian transports were guarded by military vessels bc civilian ships didnt have much in armaments.... basically your platoon (and the other platoons in your company) would be basically useless. also you keep acting like the boss but your really not. you still have the company first sergeant and company commander in immediate charge of you. they could put you and your platoon on canteen duty or worse admin and supply

    Ch 38 First Battle
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    Godfather System
    Films · NewComer714
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  • grimmhorizon
    grimmhorizon4d
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    yay back in texas.... sorry author but naruto and many similar anime has ruined me on filler arcs

    Ch 54 Chapter 54
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    Daily Drama (In American TV Shows)
    TV · Maximus_Quill
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  • grimmhorizon
    grimmhorizon4d
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    ok I'm fucking done. there is absolutely no way he would let them come along. who gives a fuck a filch. if caught he could tell Mcgonagall or Dumbledore

    Ch 33 Chapter 33 Grade B demon
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    Harry Potter: John Constantine
    Films · INDRATH
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  • grimmhorizon
    grimmhorizon5d
    Commenté

    ok is it just me or the relationship with hermione just weird and out of character

    Ch 32 Chapter 32 New task
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    Harry Potter: John Constantine
    Films · INDRATH
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  • grimmhorizon
    grimmhorizon7d
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    dude...how does a student get "fired" from a school

    Ch 31 Chapter 31 Love story
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    Harry Potter: John Constantine
    Films · INDRATH
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  • grimmhorizon
    grimmhorizon8d
    Répondu à DaoistJdI1lV

    Sargent minimum is need for that. which for back then he could get after his MOS( job) training after basic. what job is he going to get? infantry, air borne? I dont think the author ever said. his minions with him are for sure Infantry or tank operators .

    Ch 35 Fort Dix
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    Godfather System
    Films · NewComer714
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  • grimmhorizon
    grimmhorizon9d
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    yo what happened? are you still writing and going to post later or did you give up?

    Ch 11 (Not Edited at all) This is a cluster of key ideas for the future of the book(character changes, background changes and such)
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    Yellowstone: The Return of the Lost Brother, a Yellowstone Fan Fiction
    TV · Test_The_Water
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  • grimmhorizon
    grimmhorizon11d
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    I would be like my character and go the forgeries path

    Ch 12 Chapter 12:New plans
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    Warcraft Legends:The Birth of the Strongest Mage
    Jeux vidéo · Ingeniousness
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  • grimmhorizon
    grimmhorizon11d
    Commenté

    dining area or other names but restaurant isnt the right word to use

    Ch 25 Chapter 25 I'm Exorcist
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    Harry Potter: John Constantine
    Films · INDRATH
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  • grimmhorizon
    grimmhorizon12d
    Répondu à Daoist6mM4Ra

    "Do you even know the way?"

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    Reborn as an OP Sect Master of an Evil Sect
    Fantaisie · The_Procrastinator
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  • grimmhorizon
    grimmhorizon13d
    Répondu à Imen59
    "Who are you?"
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    Transmigrate to the world of The Lord of the Rings?
    Films · Ax_nevermay_cry
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  • grimmhorizon
    grimmhorizon13d
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    I have read this before .... if it's the same hes for sure not better then elves . he almost gets beat by the dwarf

    Ch 12 Chapter 11: Dwarfs
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    Transmigrate to the world of The Lord of the Rings?
    Films · Ax_nevermay_cry
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  • grimmhorizon
    grimmhorizon15d
    Commenté

    not a fan of the pokemon

    Ch 12 CHAPTER 12
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    Harry Potter: The Name's Constantine...
    Livres et littérature · Damaine_N
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  • grimmhorizon
    grimmhorizon15d
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    sounds like he should be a underworld boss instead of a assassin

    Ch 12 Ties That Bind
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    John Wick: A Revenant's Awakening
    Films · bythgr
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  • grimmhorizon
    grimmhorizon15d
    Commenté

    my question is HOW?

    Ch 53 Hiatus
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    Marvel: Tech System
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Unknown_To_All
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  • grimmhorizon
    grimmhorizon15d
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    change "college " to" house"

    Ch 19 Does This Count As A Confession In Public?
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    Harry Potter: John Constantine
    Films · INDRATH
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