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Z3742yrCommentéWe shouldn’t have left him alone...
The two Senior Whites fell silent at the same time.- Z3742yrCommenté
That was the best!
"F*ck you!" the virtuous lamia said angrily using Song Shuhang's voice. - Z3742yrCommenté
He really doesn’t know what true despair is, (golden lotus scholar world)cough*
The old tribal chief finally experienced what true despair was. - Z3742yrRépondu à Gobinlord
Thank you for the review! I have no idea about the novel named Dungeon Battle Royal. However, this is my first time trying this genre and type of story, so I'm conscious that many novels might be the same or close to mine, mainly because I have read some of them trying to figure out how to write my own story. I'll appreciate any kind of opinion to help me improve my story and try to make it more original. Again, thank you for rating it, it means a lot for me to know your opinions about this story.
- Z3742yrRépondu à Bryson99
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Ce paragraphe a été supprimé. - Z3742yrRépondu à yohananmikhael
Thanks for your comments. It’s my first ‘System’ genre novel, so I’m still learning. In the future I’ll correct some parts. ☺️
Ce paragraphe a été supprimé. - Z3743yrCommenté
What about history? 🤔
Compared to the seniors in the Nine Provinces Number One Group, Song Shuhang's specialty was probably dying the most.