I just like to make stories that make me feel good and proud about what I write.
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How am I being entitled by saying that it sucks? It ruins the flow of the story and continuously pulls you out of it.
Would Edmure go against his sister and good brother though?
He should be second, if Aegon doesn’t have a child.
Can we stop with the time jumps. Kinda annoying?
Cannons? Boooooooooooooo
Poorly executed chapter
I like that he’s petty but not vengeful
This story is just kinda racist and seems to have some touches of far right politics.
But what about the infrastructure to make that stuff. That’s billions of dollars, even a daimyo would be skeptical. Especially for something so unproven. And also, making the infrastructure from the ground up will be a challenge in its own right. Just cause you know how to make something doesn’t necessarily mean you know how to optimize its production. Unless they aren’t trying to go industrial with it.