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Sloth_Incarnate

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I just like to make stories that make me feel good and proud about what I write.

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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate12d
    Répondu à Master_Celestial

    But what about the infrastructure to make that stuff. That’s billions of dollars, even a daimyo would be skeptical. Especially for something so unproven. And also, making the infrastructure from the ground up will be a challenge in its own right. Just cause you know how to make something doesn’t necessarily mean you know how to optimize its production. Unless they aren’t trying to go industrial with it.

    I might have to watch out. While Kage level Shinobi can dish out Nuclear level attacks, if that technology is brought to this world, the entire development of the world will move in a different direction.
    Naruto Online: The Strongest Shinobi
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Fat_Cultivator
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate7mth
    Commenté

    Is this multiverse?

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 Energy
    I Am Energy In Dc
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Thirty_six_Hours
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate8mth
    Répondu à Hiddendivine

    I don’t actually like many of the Main characters of Naruto ( The Main 9 or so) but I really enjoy the world and its past. I also like the past characters more. The previous eras are just overall more interesting to me. And finally I feel like it challenges/forces authors to not follow the plot of cannon. It basically forces creativity in fanfiction. So any story that is set before cannon is an automatic plus for me.

    Ch 2 Awakening
    Naruto: Chronicles of the Fallen Realms Demon
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Hiddendivine
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate8mth
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    The idea seems cool but it’s way to close to cannon for my taste. If it was duringy other period in the world I would be all in. Goodluck tho!

    Ch 2 Awakening
    Naruto: Chronicles of the Fallen Realms Demon
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Hiddendivine
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate8mth
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    You really have a problem with going into unnecessary history lessons.

    Ch 3 Shareholding of the Colosseum
    Game of Thrones: Victor Di Natale
    TV · marcoo
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate8mth
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    I feel like none of the characters have a personality, even MC. Their has been no interpersonal connections shown at all. Everything is very robotic.

    Ch 10 A different Path!
    Naruto: A Different Time
    Anime et bandes dessinées · DesMark
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate10mth
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    Umm, I really hope the MC gets his scheming nature back, it’s what made him interesting. Other than that he’s basically the same as every other si.

    Ch 25 Part 25 - Robert‘s Rebellion
    Lannister's Sin of Pride
    TV · Cedric_7512
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate10mth
    Répondu à like_12

    Not the story, just this fight

    Ch 862 Argument
    Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
    Oriental · LazySageDao
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate10mth
    Commenté

    ‘Stuck in illusion’ is such a boring trope. Love the story overall, this part just isn’t great

    Ch 862 Argument
    Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
    Oriental · LazySageDao
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate10mth
    Commenté

    It’s starting to drag

    Ch 861 Regaining Momentum
    Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
    Oriental · LazySageDao
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate10mth
    Commenté

    Option 2

    Ch 15 Story poll #1
    Naruto: Rise Of The Uzumaki
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Unknown_To_All
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate10mth
    Commenté

    You keep saying 2D but it’s a FIVR game, so it would 100% be 3D

    Ch 1 Start
    Overgeared: Transmigrated as a Super Named NPC but also as a Player.
    Autres · Unleashed_Echo
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate10mth
    Répondu à Sloth_Incarnate

    The og plot I mean

    Ch 6 Ruining the Name
    Tales Of Demons And Gods: Reborn With Nie Lie's Knowledge
    Anime et bandes dessinées · noname_marco
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate10mth
    Commenté

    Original Timeline pls, no reason to follow the plot.

    Ch 6 Ruining the Name
    Tales Of Demons And Gods: Reborn With Nie Lie's Knowledge
    Anime et bandes dessinées · noname_marco
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate10mth
    Commenté

    Is their gonna be a timskip soon? Or is the whole story about them at 7?

    Ch 27 Chapter Twenty-Seven: Izumi III
    Naruto: of Shadows and Sharingans
    Anime et bandes dessinées · LuminouShadow
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate10mth
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    Wouldn’t Naruto’s family name still be Uzumaki? Since his father isn’t in a clan and Kushina’s Clan takes priority over his. Also it wouldn’ be to surprising if Minato took on her family name.

    Ch 25 Chapter Twenty-Five: Multiple PoVs
    Naruto: of Shadows and Sharingans
    Anime et bandes dessinées · LuminouShadow
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate11mth
    Répondu à Refraction25

    Nah, not on Reddit, but I understand the sentiment.

    With radiant smiles, my parents shower me with compliments in every possible way, but they wait for me to speak. Joining my hands in prayer, I thank the God who gave me the incredible opportunity to be reincarnated quickly.
    Naruto: Self-Evolution
    Anime et bandes dessinées · SharonMeuToba
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate11mth
    Commenté

    Do you have extras chaps for this story on your pat-reon?

    Ch 20 Chapter Twenty: Minato III
    Naruto: of Shadows and Sharingans
    Anime et bandes dessinées · LuminouShadow
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate11mth
    Commenté

    I like the idea of the story, but this might be the worse team comp and reasoning for teams I’ve ever seen.

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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate11mth
    Commenté

    All this comes off incredibly forced

    Ch 6 The Triumph of Bonds: A Battle That Forged Friendship and Strength
    Beyond the Limits I Became a Ninja in Naruto
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Bruno_oliveira
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