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why do I think of torbek when I read this
I hope white mamba is here in this world too🤣
Bro we still read your story, so continue making new chapters.
Here take it
Haha bro it's league of legend not mobile legend 😂
And I see that you write another comment to me in your moments that didn't appear on mine, you might have deleted it. I want to read that too. But I can't read it in full.
I don't know why I couldn't reply to your reply to me so I put it here. XD Haha, yeah my English is kinda not my strong suite but I'll try to say it. When I was making that foreshadow I didn't think that through since I go with the flow and mostly I write every chapter in the day I post it and not much thinking in which direction I was going. But when I think that you know as people like to predict something and make them see it through, I just want them to feel the opposite which felt good XD. And the second part you told me is the one of reasons I asked for ideas in the first place. But I will tell you this... when I said he will worked at MgRonalds, I didn't mean him being the one who cooks, he can be a janitor for all I care XD. Though thanks for your advice, hope you give me more.
Ah yeah he is a grown person inside but I did it because I want him to have a kids mindset too, not all the time he can be a grown up person. Of course being a kid for many years may also affected his mindset. Even though not much, he should also have changes...