lordlighthh

Raw please? ..............................

It is a good read where MC is not an idiot and gets overall good development . Power levels are messed up with very weird distinctions but that can be overlooked why 2.5 stars then ? Author loves milking episode where the first half of every episode is copy paste from last..... So 1 star to both update stability and writing quality

MC is supposed to be a cold composed to be mafia leader but instead he acts like a 2 year old with no impulse control . Story till chapter 50 is cliche with overused predictable troops

It is well written story but within first 20 chapters you can see that gow it contrasts itself. Initially MC was about becoming strong and follwowing his hobby and not bowing down or taking family as everything but within 1 year hw became siscon. Acting as a horse for his sister ..... For some reason, MC wants to become strong yet keeps declining opportunity that would make him stronger to act as a horse for bis sisters.... Grandparents oh we will give you training and mana potionsMC: Nah too busy. I need time so I can be horse for ky sister and teach them everything even tho the world is dangerous where strength matters the most ....TLDR: MC is dumb ao if you like Japanese white knight then give it a go else skip it

lmao To know shit, you just need to smell the air and that is good enough warning while people like you need to bathe in shit to realise that something is shit.I am not calling this book shit bit interaction between male and female is cringe. The notion that doing 300 push ups is going to help physique ..... Resistance training vs cardio. Slow twitch vs fast twitch . Things happen based on MC's convenience . It seems artificial ... as if characters have no agency and that MC is the centre of the whole universe . It is not immersive at all.

Read till chapter 5 and... Don't read it you value your braincells No build up, no reasoning ... My parents randomly came ,I barely know them and they gave me this cultivation book so I must do everything for them ...I regret reading this so much

🤷 Story is barely moving . At this point the author is just using the same template to farm chapters .

Details which make no sense. Using words on words, power levels which have never been introduced . Contrasting yourself within the first 14 chapters ( magic can't stay hidden , children show reality bending power) then in the next few chapters oh only noble bloodline can use supernatural . oh legendary get 150 year lifespan , legend is first level but of domain , but in next chapter nop only specific domains can make you live longer .... Ranks have never been introduced, the writing style is annoying and the mystery feels forced instead of having anticipation I am cringing at how hard the author is trying and failing at iy

MC is dumb as in my dog is actually smarter than him . Reading this novel will make you appreciate pretty much every other MC. A guy who only suffered in his last life is super generous to everyone. He is untrained for the actual fight, his mentality is nothing short of goldfish. He is shouting that a random soldier needs healing while he is in middle of fight and his summon saved him. Instead of fighting he is saving random kids and people ..... I could not take it beyond chapter 20

MC is supposed to be 28 year old reincarnate but he is more childish than the other kids and his experience is pretty much useless ......