follow this but make sure they survive

it's an original fiction I mean it is kind original but he kind has a semi system which he uses to travel to different universe like an anime or hame or novel etc.

rather than this you try making sure AU like vajpee govt not failing or sardar vallabhai Patel really becoming the first PM of India or lal bahadur Shastri not dying

dude is atleast doing good job by taking responsibilities man

it feels a bit monotones but it has great potential please keep updating it great story line make sure to explore more on harry potter and ASOIAF magic and myths like old gods, ancient magic and all, do not mind about negative comments, hope you all the best.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

my friend you seem to have missed the chapter where ananke grants them with gifts like storm dragon, kirai etc please continue the story instead of abandoning it like the original, please

please complete the story man really want to read further than what was in the ff,🙏🥺🙏🥺🥺🙏🥺🥺

write anew one don't delete the existing one

buddy to tell you the truth it feels like and kindergarten kid reading the university syllabus even if understand the words but not meaning

good choice in all other fanfiction people just try to ship with existing characters with out seeing other possibilities.

Great breaking of the forth wall

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it is great please continue 🙏 👍 😊 🙂 🙏👍👍👍👍👍👍

loving it, please continue 🙏