Sonkei

Thank you for the chapters,as usual, a real pleasure to read you ! Glad to see you continuing this story !

Written after chapter 108 : I found something great in this story. Something I didn’t know I missed, something I wasn’t looking for, but something I needed : The MC plays a MMORPG, with a GROUP !!! (of soon-elite-to-be-players, of course but nonetheless) Yes, I know, incredible right ? but having so many stories in online-game-settings, ending with the OP-MC soloing everything by himself, becomes boring… And yet here you are, a story where the MC falls in a prison of sort, with fellow inmat…sorry, members following, having to build a team to get out of here, in a kind of good-feeling-village settings. And I have great hopes for what will follow. I hope that this village-feeling won’t disappear later on, and that the relationship within the group will be reinforced. And I also liked the MC calling his best friends to share his OP-discovery to play together. That’s how you are supposed to play such games… Oh, and we have real IRL city names for the IRL parts, which is way, way better than the usual « X city » and such. Notes : Writing Quality : 4,5/5 => here and there some missing words and some typos, the writing-style is good for me Stability of Updates : 3/5 => my fan-thinking is taking the better of me here and I NEED the rest of the story right now y’know ? hence the harsh note. But I understand that quality takes time, so… Story Development : 5/5 => so far so good, a good balance between IRL and in-game story Character Design : 5/5 => the MC story and personality is credible for now, the IRL shows some real nice things, I like it. The group is being built right now and I am eager to know who will be the next members :-) World Background : 5/5 => Real city names. Period.