I would very much prefer if you focused on the story more then, the surrounding areas like offices , apartment room or any other thing. I'm not saying that you shouldn't talk about it, but describe only a little bit and add images.
Nevertheless, many things happened in the past two weeks, and many happy things happened to them, such as the discovery of Rei's father and Kiriko's husband.
I am done. I am sick of this. I felt the oval slide back inside me and I shuddered in relief. It was short lived as I was manhandled into the air and more fingers prodded me. This time instead of pulling my oval out they were reaching inside (I have a hole as well?!). I screamed in rage and tried to bite them but I was held firm. The hands were clinical and I heard a metallic noise as they brought up yet another measurement tool and began inserting that too.
A/N: If I'm being honest I was planning on killing all of them, it was going to be along the lines of taking away their Mortality and taking away their fear of death but then I thought of the backlash I would receive and was like I better not.
"Oh no, I say when we're done." But it seemed like the son of the Hulk didn't think like Reed or anyone else did and had created a wall of earth in front of the Hulk.
When Jacob leaves, Lisa slowly close her eyes and take a sleep but they don't realize that their son knows can not sleep because know thinking a plan what will he do in the future and will be changing and intervene with the plot.