nah, the pretentiousness is pretty hilarious tbh

honestly. I hear people talk about Idiot MC. that was chapter two. of course, she's an idiot. zero life growth of any kind before death. though some of the grammar and accuracy of science could use some work, all in all, it's not bad of a book. Definitely read worse. If I wanted an immaculate English reading with solid consistency, I read Tolkien. this is not a terrible book, but you definitely need to be patient with it. still give it average views, but keep it up, author. practice does, in fact, make perfect.

Its me the Author, I have no sense of shame, at all. It's my first book so it will not be perfect, and updates will be inconsistent at best. I do hope at the end you enjoy what I do write. See you in the next chapter.

Unless, of course, you're Manohar

You know, I see many people in the comments asking why people think the way they do. so I'll just give a little bit of real life. In a system that still used nobility as its governing force, the only thing that matters is power. There is no such thing as a "good" noble. They may do good thing ls for their country or people, but they themselves are not good people. Everything is a power play. Everything is an agenda to drive. The only thing that matters is power and how to use it. Narcissism is the only thing that can exist in a system like this. The kingdom was doomed to fail the moment it decided to go with bloodlines and nobility over merit.

honestly, just execute them right now.

No, I understand your frustration. I don't mind her not being arrogant, but this over stating of humility is getting irritating. I dont really mind her mother being shouded in mystery because that can be explored when Aster is older. But this is definitely toxic humility.

now*

Aster is a prime example of Toxic humility. At first it was grating, not I find it Hilarious.

Drae. I'm practically begging here man. please give poor Aster a boost in self esteem. it's breaking my heart man

Honestly, I feel that. I feel bad for her. Hopefully there's a great character building arc around that moving forward

these are the vibes I get from Liam

question. Is Charlie referring to Yoko as Amane as a hint, because currently her name is Yoko and her identity hasn't been revealed yet? or was this an accidental oversight?

waiting for the day Lisa goes on Aster ngl.

I like my liver thank you

Can do

Mo. chapter 402 through 410 refuse to work for me. I thought I'd let you know since I am unfortunately missing some great writing.figured I'd let you know

ngl. still waiting for the day where Lisa goes to town on Aster.

wait has aster done oral on Lisa yet?

its like the third or fourth.