PuiYa

i said kill asuma tooo

the writing is ok and their just some grammar mistakes but it's ok for me .... The main issue is the name and some move r quite annoying sometime . The plot is great keep it going

take your time man

thanks for the chapter 😁

so far so good and i hope u won't drop this fanfic this one has potential ....

damn 🤣 i hope u continue this fanfic it's wonderful work ....

bro is smoking out in the Pokemon world 🤣

thanks for the chapter 🙂 ....

condolences man , take your time man it's ok to take a break and it'll be hard time but i hope u find happiness ...

is this the end?