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2019-02-03 JointGlobal
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems15d
    Répondu à KyotoBeenPaid

    thank you

    Ch 31 The Queen Bee's Sting
    Jujutsu Kaisen: Second Life Sorcerer
    Anime et bandes dessinées · KyotoBeenPaid
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems15d
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    plagiarism plagiarism plagiarism plagiarism plagiarism plagiarism plagiarism plagiarism plagiarism plagiarism plagiarism plagiarism plagiarism plagiarism plagiarism plagiarism plagiarism plagiarism. This is from another fanfic from another author that I read a while ago. This dude is cutting the chapters up into small pieces and then posting it. The recent chapter: 104, leaves near the end of CHAPTER 15 OF THE ORIGINAL AND ACTUALL FANFIC!!! Go to fanfiction.net with this link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12592223/15/The-Spider https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12592223/15/The-Spider Go to chapter 16, scroll down a bit and you're at what you left off hear. Seriously, if this is the og author, [ of which I Highly extremely DOUBT TO HIGH HEAVENS] I'll take back the plagiarism part, BUT I KNOW for a 99.99999999% FACT this isn't. Copying and pasting other people's work isn't cool, AND putting a patron to get cash on someone else's work is even worse. IF your pressed for cash, just go make your own actual fanfic, or original concept or whatever and then put a patreon, if not do commissions and pompts or quest OR SOMETHING OTHER THAN TAKING OTHER'S WORK. If this is gone I will spam this as much time's until everyone see's this.

    "Caught in the Web of the Spider."
    Anime et bandes dessinées · ShihaoGamer
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems15d
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    * Jujustu

    " got it dark boy~" Shinko clicked his tongue in annoyance, but he just walked faster, soon Gojo and Shinko circled around the whole junutsu school.
    Jujutsu Kaisen: Gamer
    Anime et bandes dessinées · thedarknessinside
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems15d
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    *Shinko blinked, than sighed*

    Shinkobsighed as he looked at Gojo, he knew he was silly but not this silly, Shinko was soon untied by Gojo and he was taken out of the room.
    Jujutsu Kaisen: Gamer
    Anime et bandes dessinées · thedarknessinside
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems15d
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    *man

    "So who are you exactly?" Shinko finally asked the important question as his attention now was on the ment.
    Jujutsu Kaisen: Gamer
    Anime et bandes dessinées · thedarknessinside
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems15d
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    *sensei

    " let me introduce myself, my name is Gojo Satoru and I am your senses from now on" the man who introduced himself as Satoru Gojo said.
    Jujutsu Kaisen: Gamer
    Anime et bandes dessinées · thedarknessinside
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems15d
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    I will be watching this with interest. Seems decent. keep it up!

    Ch -1 Stats, skip
    Jujutsu Kaisen: Gamer
    Anime et bandes dessinées · thedarknessinside
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems17d
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    thank you for the chapter, keep up the good work.

    Ch 32 Chapter 32
    Jujutsu Kaisen: Becoming the strongest as Yuji Itadori
    Anime et bandes dessinées · TheJiujitsuGuy
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems1mth
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    great work, read it all till now in one day: Good grammar, great story telling + character development. although I do have a question: are there limits to the stats? more specifically, i see it went all the way to z for gojo, so is that the limit?

    Ch 31 The Queen Bee's Sting
    Jujutsu Kaisen: Second Life Sorcerer
    Anime et bandes dessinées · KyotoBeenPaid
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems2mth
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    keep up the good work [BTW Amora/Enchantress mind controlling thor in the begining reminds me of Gacha marvel, you read that one author?

    Ch 45 Attack on Hero Part 12
    Marvel: Abysmal Spider-Man
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Othniel_Seth
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems3mth
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    previous chapter armmaster told him to be grateful for they will provide tv so... yh.

    A whole day of waiting in a room with the smallest collection of books that could be deemed 'a collection'. My room had no windows, no T.V, no access to internet, not even a puzzle to waste my time with. It was like they were trying to get a reaction out of me by keeping me waiting...
    Where the hell am I, and is that a Kaiju!?
    Livres et littérature · Niggross
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems3mth
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    wonderful chapter as always. Keep it up man, or woman, or whoever you are.

    Ch 15 My Anger, My Pride, My Weakness Part 1
    Jujutsu Kaisen: Honor Is Useless To Me
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Zxl_Numa
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems11mth
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    Wait author is this attack on titan? I mean that sounds like the ending...

    The page had a drawing of a woman with short black hair and black eyes, wearing a white buttoned shirt with a cream-colored coat and a long grey skirt that reached her ankles, she was sitting under a tree near a small rock, touching the scarf around her neck while looking at the bird that flew off in the distance.
    Why A Dimensional Chat Group?
    Anime et bandes dessinées · OVERLOAD69
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems11mth
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    I love this story. Honestly one of the best marvel stories on this site, and probably all of marvel fanfics. It's even got me rethinking how I should plan and write my own stories. Anyways, lets get into it: Writing Quality: 3/5 -It's understandable, but not correct. quite a few times while reading it would switch for example he/she and himself/herself with the wrong person, combine words or simply typos. You can still read it and correct the grammar like a filter in your head, but that might simply be me. Stability of Updates: 3/5 -the author doesn't post as often as someone would like. you can check Table of contents to see yourself. In 62 chapters, its been an entire year and likely some months. However, while it is only 62 chapters the amount of words per chapter simply is crazy. Each chapter I believe self nearly maximizes the word count. EACH CHAPTER. so it is still a long story. And besides, this is a fanfic. One can update whenever they like to. Story Development: 5/5 -The story flows in my biased eyes, but also objectively, extremely good. Like, smooth butter good. It is of course goes linear, however the author is willingly and has skipped certain chunks of things, with no problems. How the MC power and influence develops and all the reaction's is worth it. And one thing this author can really do? Payoff. No spoilers or anything, but one of the things that since the start of the story was only now solved. No, it wasn't delayed or denied for stupid reasons, It was in the background, happening and moving but not the main focus. By chapter 62, it has ended, and what a payoff in the story. Btw, there is no nerfs or illogical things that really happen in the story. Everything has a sound, thoughtful thinking and action within it. Also, Author never nerfed and likely will never nerf the MC, as well as great power progression. Character Design: 5/5 -Every, single character feels fleshed out. They are not one dimensional at all. Even Bad guys, or minor side characters. The author does this by not only letting us observe through the MC, their actions and how they aren't retarded at all. Also, the use of different POV's is a stable in this. By switching it we see different perspectives, and none to me, especially the main cast so to say, are one dimenstional. Hell, the relationships feel genuine too. In a fanfic, on webnovel, the relationships feel Human. it's crazy. Word Background: 5/5 -Obviously, fanfics have a huge headstart with an already established Background, but as the author here does, he adds his own twists into it. the background here is a mix between comics and MCU. And that is so simply yet so ingenious. The MCU plotline for the major events, but with comics mix between, so for example: The alien invasion on new york not only happens earlier but with more heroes [not including the mc] and villains. [And here again there was a setup and payoff of the invasion.] In short, I would recommend to anyone to read this fanfics, so long as grammar and spelling isn't a big deal and you can get through it, you should read this. Although let me say this: -If you come to read pure wish fulfillment this one is not it - come here purely for that harem and smut, nah bro, this is not the one for you. -if you can't accept if the MC[Author] does something that really makes common sense to do in that scenario and that the MC is mature and isn't like a Cultivation MC who slaps all who insult him, not for you. Other than that, Enjoy this one!

    Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel
    Anime et bandes dessinées · EvansKannon
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems11mth
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    so my understanding is that shikamaru believes and 'found out' that Sasuke is just playing and doesn't really care about anything? Like shogi, he is just playing ninja?

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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems1yr
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    nice chapter, keep it up

    Ch 22 Investigation and Conjecture
    The Witcher: The Divine Hunter
    Jeux vidéo · Leohart
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems1yr
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    this has potential. Keep it up author!

    Ch 2 A whole new world.
    I am entirely average...but was reincarnated with Spider-Man's powers?
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Banchii
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems1yr
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    solid story so far. I'm enjoying it. Keep up the good work.

    Ch 12 Head of the Hag
    The Witcher: The Divine Hunter
    Jeux vidéo · Leohart
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems1yr
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    author how much backlog of this do you have? Or are you writing this fast cause its crazy. Keep up the work. Enjoying what you're doing here. Take my stones!

    Ch 41 Chapter 40
    BNHA: Singularity
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Einlion
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  • godofsystems
    godofsystems1yr
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    This just reminded me of old me when I used to watch this. Stopped midway in the series and have no idea how it ended, but just cause you are writing this, imma give you 5 stars.

    Origins of olympus au
    Jeux vidéo · MysticJamie
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