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Story is essentially loser weeb porn addict son of a rich businessman gets reincarnated and has to cuck his god dad by stealing his wives and daughters. Also, I’m not sure as they haven’t clarified so far into where I stopped reading but it seems like every daughter of Eros picks from a group a guys to have sex with when the come of age, so ostensibly no virgins unless author decides all love interests decided to skip the ceremony for some reason. It’s one big horny world and so far it seems like being a slut is celebrated, so either the love interests have slept around which sucks, or they all seemingly for no reason decided to go against the norms of the world, which is dumb.
Aaaaand I’m done. No interest in this so far clunky story with bad grammar and an asshole for an MC.
It’s been a while since I’ve read this so I’m not totally sure if what I’m saying is right, but I guess what I’m trying to say is that he did have to train a bit with his quirk in order to get strong, but you are right that he got too strong way too fast, he should have gone to UA at current Mirio level or lower instead of how strong he was. This is definetly a problem with the story as it progresses, but I guess I’m just used to so many of these power fantasies giving them even more ubsurd power even earlier on that it wasn’t even a problem to me compared to how bad the other stuff is.
Love it so far, especially the world itself. Every time I have seen an author try and combine worlds into one it has come out feeling forced or disjointed, but this story feels natural. Also, I like that the MC is just a normal human, no sacred gear or bloodline, just a normal human with the amazing ability to make references. The writing quality it top-notch with few if any grammar errors and a smooth and enjoyable writing style.
More young master Chinese crap with unlikable characters and stupid choices that only work because the author makes the improbable always happen.
I’m optimistic with the story so far, I like a lot of what I’ve seen, and the future is pretty open with a lot of potential. It is however, not perfect. I think Adam and Eve accepted him as their new son a little too quickly without much confusion. I am worried about the personalities of a lot of the characters, especially Ruby, with the gender role changes. The reason so many people like the girls in RWBY isn’t just because they are bueatiful, but because of their personalities, and I’m very worried those are going to change, Ruby we have already seen be less innocent, which is a big part of her character. I also do not like how open the MC was with Ozpin. Ozpin is willing to use those around him, especially children, to fight in his never ending war, sending them off to certain death. He manipulates others and only tells them what he wants them to know, so to willingly give him all of this info seemed like a really dumb idea. The only way I can see this not being a problem is if you change the character of Ozpin to a better person, but then he’s a much different character. This might seem like a little thing to rant so much about but it’s honestly a big sticking point for me, it along with a few other small factors, almost made me drop the story.
I don’t want the MC’s little sister to share a body with an old man, that’s gross.
I want Neo to be in his team, so what you could do is have them meet when she is twelve and become obsessed, then when she realizes he’s entering beacon she can fake her age and enter in the same year as him, making it onto his team. She is definitely short enough that she could definitely pass off as the same age as Yang. I would also like for his other teammates to be the girlfriend you mentioned, and then some Faunus, it could be an OC or some other Faunus in the story. Or if you don’t add Neo or the Faunus you could add Penny to the team instead.
I would like this, but please don’t have her find out about him until he is atleast in the school, maybe he helps stop one of Cinder’s plans and then Cinder tells Salem about a man who can use magic. Salem uses a Grimm to spy on him and then she quickly falls in love with him after watching him for a bit
I really like this, give him an active quest for each world to help fulfill the worlds original plot or to change it in some way, with 1 or 2 side quests to do other things, like with the Harry Potter example 1 quest could be collecting the Deathy Hollows and another could be to remove all of the death eaters from power in Wizarding society or to revive the Potter or Black families (maybe make Harry a girl or revive the Black family through Nymphadora Tonks).