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Thankyou! Hope you enjoyed reading so far :D

If you want to see it that way, sure. You can reduce it down to Grayson being power mad, or you could also look at it another way. He's been repressed in one way or another for his entire life, and now he's finally finding a way to exert himself upon the world instead of the other way around. In a way that is about as outlandish in comparison to his past life as it could be, no less. However you want to see it. :)

Hey man, all good. Not every story is for everyone, and that's just fine. I'm aware of how jarring the initial relationship for Suzumi and Grayson is, and it's something that I'll likely fix in an edited version of the story at some point. I've been told by many that they believe that Urahara is acting out of character, either to angry, cruel, or anything in between, and I have to agree. Mostly because it isn't my intention for him to be the same character as he was back in the show. Also, Yoruichi isn't present. Sending her to scout is only one way that Urahara is capable of collecting information, and the way he did it here was due to a deduction similar to 'keep your friends close, but your enemies closer'. There are reasons for Urahara being the way he is, and they have seemed to satisfy people so far. As for Grayson being a wimp? I don't think so, and I can't see why you'd think so either. Because he cried? Because he shows emotions beyond a stoic, psychopathic guise or just pure anger and teenage angst? Yes, Grayson cries, because suddenly having your entire world ripped from underneath you is scary, and being forced to question yourself and who and what you are is difficult. I can't, in good conscience, be told that Grayson is a wimp, when only yesterday I was told that he was 'too OP'. Maybe it's simply all a matter of perspective. Either way, I hope you return to Ribbon at some point, and if you don't that's fine. There's always another story out there, waiting for you to read it!

Up to you to decide that! But, there is reason behind the madness, of course! Whether you agree on how Urahara would act now, or in future when you understand where I'm writing him from, is up to you. However, I think there is good enough reason for him to be this way, especially with 'unknowns' :3

Thanks for the compliment man, it means a lot :)

We must go back!

Grayson is still capable of seeing outlines! He can see the display stands that are in the room without issue, but anything beyond the shape is lost on him.

Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad that you like the story so much, and hope you continue to enjoy in future! I have some other stories as well, if you ever want to read more from me :)

Glad to hear that you're enjoying!

War plays heavily on the mind. However, he may soon return to be who he once was, in due time. :))