Ikaru5

Great comment 👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽 The story from this point forward gets dark and tedious but turns around at the end of the ark.

Being black and Muslim in China is even worse! But so is being Muslim and black being in the USA. Two Polticians racing to see who can send more funds to the people killing Muslims! A whole society that has build up on top of racial profiling to discriminate against you because you’re black. A president whose idea it was to sell crack in the black neighbourhoods to destroy Black family (which btw succeeded) Use that money to destabilise non-white governments(black-brown-Muslim) all over the globe. Being black/brown-Muslim is hellmode difficulty. Anywhere anytime.

Why not chose the race?! What would you do if you end up black in America????? That would be like playing the Game on Hellmode.

Read if you love lol I stuff 😑 Halfway through the first chapter and the system wants MC to seduce a girl no older than probably 3-4 😑😑😑😑

Intent?! Look up the word and then come back and re-read the text. If the sentence says one thing while intending another… you get a failed mark on your paper in my country. It is not the readers job to guess your intentions!!! It is your job as a writer to get it across. Also, I do not understand how brain dead you gotta be to come here and defend a wrong sentence as if that would make you somehow magically right?! Like how did you manage to convince yourself that you have a point?! “Chopped trees in a 50 centimetre radius” isn’t the same as “as chopped trees with a 50 centimetre diameter” Like how insanely uneducated you’ve got to be to keep up this pointless argument with me?! I mean just go on give that sentence to GPT and ask him to explain what he understands… Please 🙏🏽 I beg you be an idiot somewhere else. You make me remember why I am so disappointed in my fellow humans. Being an idiot and starting an argument and not even knowing if you’re right or wrong and then taking it personal when someone tells you that you’re making a mistake. Does this sound sane to you?! Don’t feel insulted I am just objectively stating that you’re making a fool out of yourself.

I assume English is not your forte.

I care about what he is writing not what he is intending to say. This isn’t the Catholic Church where we interpret gods words this way or that way.

The thing that helps against this self harm is experiencing it. In life we need setbacks to grow into who we truly are If you fall and stay down then that’s it, but if you get back on your feet then that’s also it. It just shows what kind of person you’re

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