MokouFriedChicken
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A good start. The plot is a breath of fresh air compared to a lot of transmigration stories out there. The current short length might put you off now, but it's just starting, yes? And Author said that they already have the entirety of Volume 1 written out as well, so I'll be looking forward to that
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Thanks for the review 🙂
Well, that was pretty exciting. I've written in this genre myself, and I have a lot to learn from your work. From the way you build the world, to the way you weave the tension and mystery, it's really top-notch. Dialogue flows well too, with minimal grammar mistakes. Then again, that's really nitpicking. Keep on writing
Thanks for the review. Hope I won't dissapoint moving forward.
It's pretty well written. Writing is solid, as well as prose and dialogue. Everything flows smoothly enough, and the characters are likeable. Keep on writing.