XanaShadow

I recommend the newer version "Two Lost souls". In there, the characters are far more realistic. This version of the story is VERY old.

This one is getting updated because I want to finish it. I don't want to leave it unfinished or delete it.

I do apologize for not updating (and the late reply). The reason I didn't update recently is because I hit writers block, and honestly had no inspiration to write at all for the last month. I'm over it now, and will try to update as soon as I can.

I'm sorry you didn't like my story, and I'm a little sad that the MC's name is what made you stop reading. I hope you reconsider.

Sorry, evil MCs are not my thing. I apologize for that. 😔. Haou will have his brutal moments, if it makes you feel better.

Yes, but Haou himself isn't that old. Death is far older when it comes to being conscious about his power, since he was born with it. Haou was born human, and only discovered his power later on.

I do apologize for that. I recommend the newer version, "Two Lost souls", while it also includes the Institute of War, it was WAY more world building than this. I assure you, you'll like it.

Again, I'm sorry. I'm still far from an expert. Still, thank you for pointing that out and helping me understand where my mistake is. I'll be sure to take better care in the future.

The story is mainly from a 3rd point of view. Still, I'm sorry. I'm still not an expert story writer. I just don't want to repeat "Grey" or "Abyss Watcher" again and again since that can get boring.

No one knows. What makes you say that?