Eveofchaos

No. I'm Italian.

I've been very inconsistent. You guys are just too good to me.

It's me who sucked in past months/year.

I mean, it mostly was a matter of physical strength with Monica now.

I wrote that he stomped toward the incoming attack. Ugh, sure, arrowhead can work. It's just that the world sort of collapses at its passage.

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my stories so much. As for the descriptions, I was mostly worried about whether I made mistakes and such. I reread it, and while it's vague and a bit short, I feel it can work as an initial/general description.

I mean, different situations allow different descriptions. This was only the first one anyway. It's more of an appetizer to give the general idea.

I'll reread and see whether some descriptions can be improved. Anyway, this won't be the only one.

I changed it a bit.

I don't give spoilers.