IvyHav3n
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Leave me alone, I'm reading
2018-12-20 JointGlobal
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IvyHav3n3yrCommentéIt's not like he knows any better...poor guy.
I beg you, fall in love with me!- IvyHav3n3yrCommenté
I do that to my best friend, much to her chargin. Very fun!
"You're brazen," she stated, just as one hand wrapped around her lower back, hugging her closer to him. He towered over her, enough for him to comfortably rest his chin on top of her head if he wanted to. - IvyHav3n3yrCommenté
Now smash WJs!
"It's a stupid tradition, really," he told her before slipping it off of him and slipping it in between her cupped hands. "But I'm just a fool for love," he mumbled and with that said, disappeared into the night. - IvyHav3n3yrCommenté
I think you may have forgotten a girl after the little...English is weird.
The man smiled as he looked more at the little girl who was straining her neck to look at his face. He bent on his knees so that she didn't have to strain her neck, "Hey, Little are you saying those words to me? Do you know me?" - IvyHav3n3yrCommenté
*Tomorrow Please note that I'm not correcting you because I hate your story, I love it so far. I just hope that I can help you make your story better!
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Instead of "complete my first" I think you're trying to say "I'm not done talking, Ma'am." or "Let me finish speaking first, Ma'am"
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Last day? Don't you mean yesterday?
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Haha...He's in for some chemical cocktails.
"Is that alright with you?" Long Yi said, his voice had turned gentle. Seeing Lyca's dark look, made him think that she really disliked him. And it was probably because he was someone from the Long Family. But he was not planning to give up. Instead, he was planning to enjoy the chase.