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love it

I need more 😐 do you have a patron

he meant that he has a human form

was kind of pointless I rather actual content besides some random side story

bro don't look so down on urself your doing fine amazing actually ur better than 80% of the other authors on here you might notice your improvement now so I recommend writing a short story once a week month or whatever and try to make it as good as u can at that point in time keep them all and then whenever you feel like you are terrible at writing making no progress look back at those short stories at the beginning it's hard to get better at writing after a certain threshold but u have to keep pushing yourself at one point it's no longer about the grammar it's about the soul of a book and how captivating it is alright

I like it keep it up

personally not my cup of tea literally when he's a child still he's fcking everyone in sight and is already powerful enough to slap sukuna and gojo around in chapter 2 it's more of a wish fulfillment story of the author imo not bad writing quality tho and the idea was good with the powers he got idk just not what I look for in a book tho

I like this a mc going to a school other than UA is fantastic

one of the better mha fanfics around it incorporates parts of mha that's generally left unexplored and how the less fortunate are forced to crime to survive like Gentle. the mc is also smart and uses his abilities wisely which is nice it's hard to predict what's going to happen next and keeps you engaged and on your toes that shows that our author knows what he's doing keep up the good work